One Of My Haikus

Lorraine Ferns By Lorraine Ferns, 9th Apr 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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Perfection and trying to be perfect can be exhausting.

tired of being perfect....

I have a poetry blog called thetruanttrain and I seem to have got hooked into writing haiku. I feel I should read more because I'm at a standstill with some of my poetry, and I believe that reading can trigger stuff. I wrote this haiku maybe, because of the mood I was in, or I'm always trying to find new stuff to write about. I have to be in the mood to write, and lately I've been dragging my heels- but I'm going to try to push myself more.

I hope you like this:

they say angels watch
us........but - from how far away?

a private walkway....


Angels, Haiku, Perfect, Poetry, Privacy, Solitude

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author avatar Lorraine Ferns
I love to write - I go through stages of expression - sometimes I concentrate on poetry and then other times I attempt short stories.

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author avatar Retired
9th Apr 2015 (#)

I think angels watch us too. Yes, I wonder how far away they are?

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author avatar Kingwell
10th Apr 2015 (#)

I think that angels are very near to us. We all have our dry spells whether we write poetry or prose - or both. Good share. Blessings.

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