Only a dream

LOVERME By LOVERME, 24th Mar 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1ldas_q7/
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Only a dream..Now I am about to reach the Zenith ...,if not the distant horizon ...beyond which there remains nothingness ...So i continue to dream ...I suppose for the eternal..eternity solace and peace...

Only a dream


Only a dream


When I dream of two cocks fighting,
I seem to imagine two poets
dribbling with a voluminous load of words,
trying to sort out
who amongst them will come first ….


I dream of a day when they all queue up
for a Nobel
but somehow I am ushered in...

My best critiques yell.... hold it, tis unfair
he doesn’t know a dime of poetry

we dive into deep seas
in search of oysters with diamonds,

not pearls,

metaphor is all the more
the sign of a poet
a simile for a smile, maybe

then my dream bursts like a volcano
they all pick me up and say
happy day,
this boy goes out today
with the bathtub, so to say,

my eyes open in stark nudity
crazy dream twas
did you witness it
Oh! How I wish!

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
24th Mar 2014 (#)

Wonderful piece!

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author avatar LOVERME
25th Mar 2014 (#)

thank u so much Ferns

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author avatar Songbird B
24th Mar 2014 (#)

It really does sometime feel like our dear Lady A has nothing better to do with her day that pepper other writers pages in poetry..Spam can be so annoying when not requested.

Lovely poetic verse and dream dear Loverme..An enjoyable read indeed my friend. \0/x

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author avatar LOVERME
25th Mar 2014 (#)

SOME ONE...
when they want attention.. fake illness ..
heaven knows why wikis let her loiter despite so many complaints ...
perhaps her lengthy writings ...bring in for wiki some money ...
so i simply erase -----quickly

thanks for ur kindness...
as you please me

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
25th Mar 2014 (#)

Dreams do not cost us anything - the poor dream of becoming rich while the rich have nightmares of becoming poor! There is enough place for everyone so let there be competition, but a healthy one - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
25th Mar 2014 (#)

great Lord ur analysis as always

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author avatar Mariah
27th Mar 2014 (#)

we dive into deep seas
in search of oysters with diamonds..not pearls..
just profound maestro..wise and beautiful words..and there have been many astounding poems written by you.so .anyone who says u don't know a dime of poetry has no soul and is blind to your gift my friend..pay no heed to rubbish and listen to those who see the true maestro in you..

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
27th Mar 2014 (#)

Ah , the Eternal and Solace are not dreams dear friend ...they are the true reality ..just for the asking .
May they be the reality that come true for you .
Many blessings
Stella ><

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author avatar LOVERME
28th Mar 2014 (#)

thanks for ur kind visit

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author avatar LOVERME
28th Mar 2014 (#)

you at times do astound me ma'am poet the maestronia

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