Our Lives Intertwine

jocelyn By jocelyn, 7th May 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/mpifwl4z/
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Just a sample of how life can suddenly transform us if we let it and if we step back we can gain a whole new perspective on life and the world around us.

Have You Ever

Have you ever looked at someone and really known who and what they are?
We pass by people every day but do we ever take the time to see them,
to come to know their thoughts and deepest desires?

Each one has their own life, their own pain, their own love, their own story
and no one listens to what they've got to say,

But, have you ever looked at someone and seen their life flash before your eyes,
have you ever felt their pain within you,
have you ever felt an aching in your heart for the love they passed on to you?

Have you ever known their whole story from just one glance or touch of the hand?

Have you ever looked at someone, really looked, and at that moment felt love for them,
such intense love, that at that moment it overtakes you and brings you to tears?

And in that moment all your worries are washed away by the tears, all your fears,
In that moment you have no concerns but are completely content
and nothing can take that feeling away from you,

Until the one you love, the one who makes you feel completely safe
and keeps you smiling hours on end,
that one is taken away,
That one who has your heart in his hands,
that one must be careful what he does with it,
for it is sensitve and desperate,
desperate for love,
desperate for affection,
deperate for a listening ear,
desperate for the one to love her
in every way she loves him,
desperate for his touch
that means everything to her
and is worth waiting for all day long,

Look at her she's desperate, in love, and in need,
Look at him, he's desperate, in love and confused,
as to what to do next,
Look at them, they're helpless,
in love, on the path to find one another,

Look at me, I'm trembling,
in love,
in desperate need for your arms,
your eyes,
your hands,
of you,
Loook at you, you're in love,
and in a hurry
to figure out the path we're on,
Look at us, we're in love,
we have each other
and will soon have forever
to understand more every day.


Dating, Future Plans, Intertwine, Lives, Love, Overlap, Relationships

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author avatar jocelyn
Very passionate about life and love...photography and writing poetry helps me display that passion.

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
8th May 2011 (#)

Just absolutely wonderful!

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author avatar Songbird B
8th May 2011 (#)

Couldn't agree more with Steve...This is really lovely...You are a fine poet my friend...

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author avatar jocelyn
9th May 2011 (#)

Aw thank you Steve and Songbird! Glad you enjoyed it.

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author avatar D in The Darling
9th May 2011 (#)

Right on point. This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing and please keep them coming.

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author avatar Tranquilpen
9th May 2011 (#)

You command this subject. Thank you

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author avatar jocelyn
9th May 2011 (#)

Thank you! I will try to keep it up!

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