Out In The Mountains

Trisha M.Hopkins By Trisha M.Hopkins, 22nd Oct 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/cnx01trm/
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this is one of my poems i written and i hope you like it.please comment thank you

Out In The Mountains

September.25.1998
Trisha Barrek Hopkins

Out in the mountains
I see a dove
Sitting on a fountain
A sight so beautiful you could love
Silky skin
Eyes as blue as the sky
Tall and thin
But not up high

It's smile so bright
The purest heart
A trance you don't fight
You want to be its other part
You see the light
You always want it from the start
But too late it goes up in frieght
You beg it back
To have a snack
Just to talk
Or to go for a walk

Clouds so puffy and clear
Promising not a tear
Just stay and listen
Just to hear
To see the moment glisten

Out in the mountains
Up so high and far
Remembering the fountain
Wishing on that star
Knowing your love isn't that far
Wanting to forever love
That day in the mountains
Something you can count on

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author avatar Trisha M.Hopkins
37, Mother of 2 gorgeous daughters 13 n 10, Found my high school sweetheart after 15 years and now we celebrated our 1yr anniversary aug-27-13. Ill never let him go no matter what. I Love poetry

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author avatar brendamarie
22nd Oct 2015 (#)

very beautiful poem!!!

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author avatar Trisha M.Hopkins
22nd Oct 2015 (#)

Thank you What did you like about the poem?

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
22nd Oct 2015 (#)

Your poem is as inspirational as nature that we take for granted - can we match its beauty, variety, love?

We are indeed blessed - siva

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author avatar Trisha M.Hopkins
22nd Oct 2015 (#)

Yes we are blessed to have nature to look at. Alot of people don't understand that this is the only one we have. Hopefully we can repair the damage we've done so far. For our children s sake

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author avatar vickylass
22nd Oct 2015 (#)

Do never miss a chance to read a good poem on Nature each passing day!

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author avatar Trisha M.Hopkins
22nd Oct 2015 (#)

Thank you I'm glad you like it. Hope you follow me and read more of my poems

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