Pain that Cannot Heal!

brendamarie By brendamarie, 29th Jun 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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This is a poem about a person that can not heal. They have been hurt so deeply, they feel a part of their soul was taken away.

Pain that cannot heal!

Time heals all so they say.
I set back and pray.
Let time remove all the pain
The pain I hide inside.
Let time remove
The darkness that is in my heart.

How can time heal the pain?
The pain of the loss
The loss of part of my heart.

My soul fell a part
With this loss.
A loss that cannot heal.
I wish, it would.
But, the loss of a part
A part of my soul
Has disappeared.

I have forgiven
Those who have
Cause this to happen.

I do not blame them
For all of this pain.
I just wish it would heal!
But, it has been over twenty years.

I pray everyday!
Pray to God
To take the pain away.
But, the loss of part of your soul
Will never heal.


I wrote this poem many years ago for a class that I took in high school. The assignment was to write with emotion. That is what I did. I tried to put myself, in my grandmother's shoes. Her son died in her arms. I hope, you enjoyed it.

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author avatar Retired
30th Jun 2015 (#)

A very touching poem. There are some pains that do not go away easily.

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author avatar brendamarie
30th Jun 2015 (#)

The pain of the lose of a child stays with you.

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author avatar Carol Roach
30th Jun 2015 (#)

yes the pain of losing a child never goes away so they say. I am fortunate that it has never happened to me

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
30th Jun 2015 (#)

My condolence for losing your child. Were you taking care of the offspring or were you like CockROACH who let her child become a jailbird because of her whoring hole that needed pleasuring???

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author avatar Jennifer Dombrowski
30th Jun 2015 (#)

I am sorry for your grandmother. No child should ever have too die before the grandparents or parents. You wonderfully put yourself in her shoes. You did a great job!

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author avatar Retired
30th Jun 2015 (#)

Great piece! Keep up the good work, Blessings to you.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
1st Jul 2015 (#)

I can connect with the deep emotions expressed Brendamarie.

Whenever I come across people leaving this world, I think of the many pains that they have endured and women of earlier times stoically carried a heavy burden. It was common at that time to lose their children but the pain remains all their lives - siva

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author avatar dnaraven
2nd Jul 2015 (#)

Nice one..keep up..n keep smiling

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author avatar Kingwell
9th Jul 2015 (#)

There is so much pain in the world. Blessings.

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