Pale Writer

Utah Jay By Utah Jay, 20th Jan 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

I think sometimes it is nice to write something short, and sometimes the feeling there,
in those short little lines can be bigger than the page it is written on.

Pale Writer


Pale Writer

Ever
So slowly
Color fades
Bewitched by night
To gray
And hints
Of yellowed white
While candle light
Flickers
A twisted step
Between little beds
And slips
And broken silhouettes
Feeling nothing
Touching nothing

Emptiness


Emptiness
Is a hallow place
Where lonely hearts
Lithe
To lose color

Poetry and photos by uTAH jAY

Are you looking for a special place to write and post your poetry? WEll do like I did and write it on wikinut and get paid. It is one of my best ideas ever.

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Bewitched, Color, Color Fades, Colors, Lonely Heart, Lonely Love, Lonely Nights, Lonelyness

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author avatar Utah Jay
I have been writing since the beginning of time it seems, not because I want to write, but because I have too. My favorite form of writing is poetry, all kinds and types of poetry.

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author avatar Harris Mungai
20th Jan 2015 (#)

That graphic is really nice Sir..salute!

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author avatar GenkiWorld
20th Jan 2015 (#)

shott, but overflowing with meaning :) i too think that from time to time it's good to write something short, the feelings that come with it are just as rewarding.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
20th Jan 2015 (#)

Short, sweet but melancholic too, thanks Utah Jay for stamping your own signature - siva

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
20th Jan 2015 (#)

Wonderful poem Utah and one of a kind writing, cheers!

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author avatar Carol Roach
21st Jan 2015 (#)

I really love that picture, great poetry but then you are always giving us such stellar work

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author avatar spirited
21st Jan 2015 (#)

pale writer?

You use too much colour to be called a pale writer Utah Jay!

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author avatar Utah Jay
21st Jan 2015 (#)

Thank you Harris, you are so kind to say so.

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author avatar Utah Jay
21st Jan 2015 (#)

Thanks Genki, yes, I agree with you...Short and sweet.

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author avatar Utah Jay
21st Jan 2015 (#)

Thank You Sivar, I just hope I don't stamp too hard.

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author avatar Utah Jay
21st Jan 2015 (#)

Thanks Fern, nice to see you.

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author avatar Utah Jay
21st Jan 2015 (#)

Thanks Carol, that picture is hung on a wall in an old bunk-house on an island in the Great Salt Lake.

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author avatar Utah Jay
21st Jan 2015 (#)

Thanks spirited, one of the best complements a poet can get.

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