Passing of One You Love...Whoever it May Be....

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 4th Jan 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2apyp3nr/
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Well to the best of us this will happen...it has for me but I still talk with my mum inside of me...many others too...try it..believe or not you can....ha!

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Your mother is dying
And die she will
No matter what you say or do
Your mother is dying
Far from you

You may wonder why
And blame another
But only she can say
That it be this way

For againstness
Against one who is Light
Carries its own reward
Or punishment
Be it as it may

her time is up...

This will not change
For her time is up
And nothing can
Forestall that that has been
Pre-ordained

We are but allowed
That which we choose
Long ago in realms outside of here

With Lords of Karma we sat
Choosing who we should be
To work out the karma
Accrued through lifetimes past

we choose....

We choose our mums and dads
And those we would meet
The work to do and to complete
So perfect is it all

But nay you say
It cannot be that way
But still it is
And cannot be changed

The number of years or days
Allotted to us
Are well chosen
And so will be

tears of regret..

And who are you to question why
You who strayed far from the beaten path
With little respect to those who loved you

You mouthed the words
But little came from your heart
For there lay a wilderness
Too complex to navigate

Now time shows up
Its travail
Its pain and hurt
And those things you
Never cared about

Do not wail
Do not beseech
For there is nothing
You can do
But just accept
and so it is...

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Carolan Nathan, Choices, Cnwriter, Going, Karma, Knowing, Loved Ones, Passing, Perfection, Regrets

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar viewgreen
4th Jan 2015 (#)

Very wonderful article and it's so sparkle the beautiful words you share here. Thank you and have good days.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jan 2015 (#)

thank you so much viewgreen...

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author avatar RondaKay
4th Jan 2015 (#)

That was very beautiful. It drew me in and I felt a bit sad. Great work.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jan 2015 (#)

life goes on Ronda just as death does...all one big energie field...happy New Year...

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author avatar M G Singh
4th Jan 2015 (#)

Great post..I love your posts

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jan 2015 (#)

thank you Madan...i do yours too...blessings..

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
4th Jan 2015 (#)

Beautiful! We choose the time to be born and we choose our time to die, and we do that before we are born. Love all your poetry carolina.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jan 2015 (#)

thank you so much dear Steve...blessings..

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author avatar wonder
4th Jan 2015 (#)

So perfectly you sounded the truth,a touching poem with a positive note.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jan 2015 (#)

thank you wonder...namaste...

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author avatar Utah Jay
4th Jan 2015 (#)

I have always
believed we chose our parents in the time before we came here, I have heard this spoken of by wiser men than I, I just wish I would have been a better son to them than I was…Great post carolina

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jan 2015 (#)

just love yourself for being how you were dear Utah...and change you wishes to acknowledging that what you did was right and proper...at that time. no regrets now...

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author avatar spirited
5th Jan 2015 (#)

The choices we make are not often easy choices to make though.

Your poetry helps us to understand how our choices are connected together through perfection, "So perfect is it all."

another very meaningful poem, keep up the production line in 2015 Carolina. I know that you will....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
5th Jan 2015 (#)

i will if i can dear spirited...you too keep on with your great posts...love you...

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author avatar Natraj
10th Jan 2015 (#)

When the time is up, stopping is not possible but we love mom, goddess known to us.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
10th Jan 2015 (#)

yes Natrai...we do..blessings

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
12th Jan 2015 (#)

Ultimate justice here is beyond our ken but good that we decide that by our own actions. Touching and meaningful post, Carolina - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
12th Jan 2015 (#)

thank you so much Siva...

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author avatar Judy Ellen
13th Jan 2015 (#)

Thank you for this very heartwarming and inspirational poem about the end of life. I agree that when our time is up we are called to another place far grand than one can ever imagine or fathom. The fact that a loved ones time is up is hard for us to accept but little by little I see God's plan unfolding even with the recent death of my 47 year old son! God is still in control and there is a reason for everything!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th Jan 2015 (#)

yes dear Judy...it is all perfect...and your beloved son will always be in your heart...blessings...

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