Tin Can By Tin Can, 28th Mar 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I am glad when I am able to put pen to paper in any given situation.


I spotted her from afar. She was in my line of sight. I was in my car. It was the material, it clung just right. It was not loose, nor awry. It held her perfect form as she walk by. Lovely to see, yet, another vision of beauty. And it was there up ahead, sauntering before me.

I could not help but stare as the material clung firmly to her rear. A rear so neat. A rear so sweet. Resembling a ripe peach. Good enough to eat. Oh what a treat. I had seen one before. But never in my dreams had I hoped for more. But it was there. And I had it, trapped, in my stare.

The camel coloured cloth was more than enough to enhance its beauty. In my vehicle I slowed down, for it was my duty. My duty to take in the full view of this absolute beauty. My duty to ogle this booty that formed so perfectly and carried so elegantly.

The shape of a peach. The cheeks did not breach, the contours of the said camel coloured fabric. The pain in my heart, began to start as the stark realisation was tragic. But the sexual momentum, I knew for certain, won my approval as well as my attention.

By her side someone was walking there. This is when jealousy impaired my stare. Lucky beggar was he, as their stroll together paced evenly. No rush. No hurry. No haste. Oh I did wish I were in his place. But even worse, I had a mind filled with desire. Which was in really bad taste. I mean, deep in the mire.

Sordid thoughts ran around my cesspool of a mind. Of how I'd like to pound that peachy behind. I'd come over like a bitch in season. I wanted not just the behind also the nether region. But to my dismay I was in my car. And though spotted from afar, our worlds would never entwine. She'd be in hers and I'd be in mine.


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My poetry tend to veer towards feelings of emotion. Love. Sex. Desire. Most of my verses will reflect these sentiments as I mainly write straight from the heart. 31 Jan 15.

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author avatar Retired
29th Mar 2015 (#)

Awesome piece! Thanks for sharing.

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author avatar Tin Can
29th Mar 2015 (#)

Thank you Joyesh for liking my work. I must admit. I too love this poem.

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author avatar Kingwell
29th Mar 2015 (#)

Good share. Blessings.

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author avatar Tin Can
29th Mar 2015 (#)

Thank you for your kind words.

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