Pitter Patter

Maurice G By Maurice G, 22nd Apr 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A short, silly poem about a mouse that was found under the floor, and was found running along a pipe.

Pitter Patter

Pitter patter every night,
Seems to happen with no light,
Pitter patter from the floor,
Getting louder more and more,
Pitter patter need to see,
This is now annoying me.

Raised the Floor

Pitter patter raised the floor,
Need to look, what a chore,
Pitter patter used a lamp,
Found a mouse in the damp,
Pitter patter found the sound,
On a pipe in the ground.

Peace and Quiet

Pitter patter all night long,
Using pipe to go along,
Pitter patter need some peace,
Covered pipe all in fleece,
Pitter patter sound has gone,
Now at last my job is done.

Maurice G


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author avatar Maurice G
I am retired, have worked in the leisure industry for abpout 40 tears, I am married with 2 grown up biproducts.
In this trade I have met peoples from all over the world !

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author avatar Melissa Dawn
22nd Apr 2012 (#)

Ah Maurice I can relate my friend. Thanks for the chuckle.

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author avatar shallimarRose
23rd Apr 2012 (#)

LOL Maurice... i wrote one year about ants lol.. enjoyed this very much.. sR

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author avatar Cleo Cole
25th Apr 2012 (#)

Love how this escalated almost making it sound louder(mirroring your annoyance)...brilliant and funny x

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author avatar Maurice G
25th Apr 2012 (#)

Thank you for your comment Cleo.
Lancastrian humour I`m afraid !

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author avatar Delicia Powers
26th Apr 2012 (#)

Very creative...

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