Playing with words. Showing how poetry is a puzzle or words

jarea poet By jarea poet, 5th Jul 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1a2n8g74/
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Playing with words in a poem. I have been told my writing is too dark so i have tried something new. "Bring the nouns slowly"... shows how words are 'tools' to describe emotion, to make the reader visualize through how the author pieces them together.. each line is created to paint the picture the author is trying to project.. Poetry is a puzzle of words. each poem is a different puzzle. this is my attempt to rise from the darkness friends say my poetry comes from.

Bring the nouns slowly


bring the nouns slowly the adjectives and verbs
this story begins with a journey of words

'likes' are sharpened and passions are cued
while pronouns seductively preposition the blues

whisper a verb softly, tickling my ear
say it adverbly naughty then passionately clear

kiss my verb quickly and with no delay
touch my noun softly hearing you say

do what you do... then do it to me
dot all my I's quickly and cross all my T's

then whisper the words quietly,
that gives you to me

jlh

Bring the nouns slowly

bring the nouns slowly the adjectives and verbs
this story begins with a journey of words

'likes' are sharpened and passions are cued
while pronouns seductively preposition the blues

whisper a verb softly, tickling my ear
say it adverbly naughty then passionately clear

kiss my verb quickly and with no delay
touch my noun softly hearing you say

do what you do... then do it to me
dot all my I's quickly and cross all my T's

then whisper the words quietly,
that gives you to me

jlh

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Nouns, Poems, Poems About Life, Poems For Love, Poems On Emotions, Poems On Love, Poems Poetry Poets, Verbs, Words Matter, Words Poem

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author avatar jarea poet
I have been writing most of my life but just in the past year or so i have the time to dedicate to it.

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
5th Jul 2013 (#)

There is nothing wrong with dark poetry, not all poems can be about sunshine and butterflies.

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author avatar jarea poet
5th Jul 2013 (#)

thats what i tell them.. i dont have rainbows and unicorns in my head...

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