Princess Sinderella and the evil Witch ....A Different Take on A Childhood Favorite

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 29th Jun 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/10vkkock/
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I have made changes so no negativity can remain..My Inner Councillors prompted me to take off the names for they do not want me to go along that downward path. But this is still a tale of good versus bad as the fairytale of Cinderella does tell...

A Lovely Princess

Once upon a time
In a far off land
There lived a lovely princess
Her name was Sinderalla
(my claim to dubious fame!!!)

All the attributes of beauty
Had she
A nature faire kind and sweet
As lovely as a newborn babe

The Witch

Into this innocent child's life
A wicked witch did come
She did not like the babe fair
Really was not a lot of fun

All the court knew of her evil
Of her venomous ravings too
Everywhere she went they shunned her
So wicked she in every way

Taken Away

Jealous was her nature
Destroying with her ugly words
The calm and sweetness of the palace
Set on her were royal guards

They bound her in a metal casing
Threw away the key
And from a tree top high they placed her
Where only demons of the night could see
and peck hungrily


Compassion in her heart had Sinderella
Brought the witch down from the tree
Banished her from the kingdom
Never more to return a pariah in the land

Prince of Hearts

The evil witch one day
Back into the palace did slink
Setting up a spinning wheel
In the attic out of sight

This the lovely Sinderella
Came upon one summer's day
She sat and spun the silken threads
Pricked her finger on the wheel
And into slumber fell

Awakened

Long she slept under enchantment
Till one heavenly afternoon
The Prince of Hearts he wandered by
Kissed her ruby ips and woke her
From that enchanted sleep

Everyone did celebrate
The return of their lovely princess
The evil witch then slunk away
Never to be seen again
Hip hip hooray!!!!


The moral of this story is
The wicked always pay
Full circle back to them
Their stuff doth find its way...

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
29th Jun 2013 (#)

oh oh oh!!!!!!!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Mark for remoderating this and also your good advice ...

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author avatar wisenut
30th Jun 2013 (#)

Cinderella is one of my favorite childhood characters. And the Sleeping beauty too . .Thank you cnwriter, for writing a poem involving them. Loads and loads of thanks.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jun 2013 (#)

yes it is pretty is it not and a love doing different slants on fairy tales...thank you lots too and for enjoying it...carolina xox

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
30th Jun 2013 (#)

Aha! Here it is! Nicely done, Carolina! Personally, I wish that the evil in Anisha would change as a result of being saved by SIN, but what you've written is more in tune with life -- do someone evil a good turn and they won't change or appreciate it!! Sad but true...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jun 2013 (#)

yes so true Phyl..and we do have a few anisha's here....there...everywhere..pity indeed it is....

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author avatar Shirley Shuler
30th Jun 2013 (#)

Thank you Carolina for this new spin on Cinderella...loved it...hugs

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Jun 2013 (#)

thank you Sheila ..a fun piece to write!!! hugs to you....from carolina

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
1st Jul 2013 (#)

I not only deleted but did not read your rantings. ansha..they are quite easy to avoid so I do not have to keep your venomous words on my pages.I think you need a lot of light because you are on a downward path into a hell of your own making ...actually you make me laugh and I have pity for you at the same time

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author avatar Buzz
1st Jul 2013 (#)

A most enthralling article, love, images and all!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
1st Jul 2013 (#)

thank you so much Buzz...a metaphor I guess but it needed to be written...

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author avatar wonder
1st Jul 2013 (#)

Only one life, no time for evil.A lovely piece, blessings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
1st Jul 2013 (#)

thank you wonder...blessings to you...

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author avatar Delicia Powers
1st Jul 2013 (#)

creative as always cn...:0)

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
1st Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Delicia..am enjoying doing these fantasy fairytales...have to do more indeed..with loving to you from carolina....

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author avatar Ellen
1st Jul 2013 (#)

A great spin on the fairy tales. Beautifully done and very creative.
thank you
Ellen

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
1st Jul 2013 (#)

and thank you Ellen..greetings from my heart to yours...

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author avatar Oscar Crawford Media
1st Jul 2013 (#)

Every capacity for everything is alive in us an waiting the proper rain to break through for a moment's expression. Hearts reveal what is real even the wait is long and the touch of another brings the needed rain.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
1st Jul 2013 (#)

sometimes the rain can be shards of glass...breaking window panes....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Jul 2013 (#)

Sin thanks you again for adding to her comments...bless you...

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author avatar Trillionaire
5th Jul 2013 (#)

Thank you.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
13th Jul 2013 (#)

and you too...

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author avatar Lauraelrod
10th Aug 2013 (#)

This was wonderful

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
10th Aug 2013 (#)

thank you Laura...

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