Problems at Home

Utah Jay By Utah Jay, 25th Apr 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2sq2lqjm/
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

Just a line or two to let you know I am thinking about you...Be back as soon as I can.

Problems at Home

I just want everyone to know
that I have not forgotten them,
that my love for them grows
with each new day and read
and that life is beautiful
when everything goes right
and everything works correctly
and this is the problem...My darn @*&&&^ @#4* Computer wont work.

It seems this page was too short
As there is no such thing
As a quick note
So here goes...This is taking hours &%$#$ &%$%% computer!


To Make it to Five Hundred

A shadow of shadows lost and stilled
In measured spaces
Of the modern mind, each
Absorbed in the delicate notes
Of the new day rising.
This is the struggle
Of the common soul
Deciphering light
Where there was no light
And doing it
Without the slightest comprehension
Of what light might be,
Or what it could be.
Perhaps the vision could be found
Within the whispering vibrations
Of the solar clouds
Racing by at break-neck speeds,
Or in the colors of something
That seems soft and delicate
In the sliver strings
Of morning sunshine
That stirs the soul ,
The feel of notes,
The dance of rhythm,
A dream within a dream.
Without this
The turbulence of kiss
Cannot be told
In its proper tones.
Color becomes pale here,
Bodies become motionless,
Light turns dark
And dark becomes light,
And love remains a passionless play
Held in our hands
Placid and motionless
As the rest of my world,
Has gone astray
Marching by the far side
Within the eyes of passersby.


uTAH jAY

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Broken, Communication, Community, Compassion, Computer, Content, Control, Corruption, Out Of Control

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author avatar Utah Jay
I have been writing since the beginning of time it seems, not because I want to write, but because I have too. My favorite form of writing is poetry, all kinds and types of poetry.

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
25th Apr 2015 (#)

Wish you well and hope your problems resolve themselves soon.

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author avatar Retired
25th Apr 2015 (#)

Get your computer repaired soon. We just can't miss your poetry for long.

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author avatar Retired
26th Apr 2015 (#)

We've all been there! Keep your chin up!

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author avatar Retired
26th Apr 2015 (#)

Now I know I am not alone in having a love/hate relationship with my computer.

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author avatar Carol Roach
26th Apr 2015 (#)

well I hope you get back here soon, we all miss you

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author avatar spirited
26th Apr 2015 (#)

This is your second fight with your computer too LOL.

the struggle of the common soul is not so common as the solitary soul is not so commonly struggling though, isn't it?

Each struggle is uniquely common to that soul, or is it?

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author avatar Shamarie
26th Apr 2015 (#)

I can definitely relate to computer problems, Utah Jay! Great share!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Apr 2015 (#)

Utah Jay, I'm on my 3rd computer so I definitely feel your pain. I hope you get back online soon. I will leave the light on for you! Hugs!

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
3rd May 2015 (#)

It is tough to be alive without our life companion of modern days - the gadgets! hope to see you with renewed vigor soon, Utah Jay - siva

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author avatar L. R. Laverde-Hansen
20th May 2015 (#)

Congratulations on being selected Author of the Day!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
20th May 2015 (#)

Utah, I miss you! Congratulations on being author of the day. Hugs to you!

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author avatar WOGIAM
20th May 2015 (#)

Missing you also, Utah, i hope your pc issues are resolved soon, take care.

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author avatar Retired
20th May 2015 (#)

Congratulations you are the author of the day! Miss you!

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author avatar SaigonDeManila
23rd May 2015 (#)

Love the beauty in your wicked mind Utah Jay as effective as these lines :
"seems this page was too short
As there is no such thing
As a quick note
So here goes..."
Congratulations!

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author avatar Retired
25th May 2015 (#)

I'm beginning to miss you pretty bad, Utah!

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
2nd Jun 2015 (#)

Hello Utah and nice post as always my friend, cheers!

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author avatar Kingwell
7th Jun 2015 (#)

Hoping you will be back soon. Blessings.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
8th Jun 2015 (#)

I resonate with Kingwell's words. See you soon. Utah Jay - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
31st Jul 2015 (#)

i know i know dear Utah...you are the best and dearly loved....

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author avatar SaigonDeManila
15th Apr 2016 (#)

Where are all the months gone by? Man you are missed over here!

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author avatar Michael C Parker
25th May 2018 (#)

Technology always plays tricks that is why i keep my old typewriter handy. Still waiting for your return

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