Profound Ponder

shallimarRose By shallimarRose, 26th Apr 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/17i9du61/
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A poem of pondering... Ageing and looking back over the years at past mistakes and forgotten promises ... .

Silhouette

I have felt it in the whispers
of the morning breeze
retracing ambiguous moments
re-visited questions
in hours of the Dawn
holding onto memories of agility
when I had not yet felt it
the fragility of age
times I've tried to ride it out
and fell in life
feeling more like a commodity
used and tossed
lacking luster
losing quality
longing for E-quality
rendering myself lost
in dreams of yesterday
oceans of profound ponder
remedial relevance
required recompense
in the fluidity of a rhyme
or a memory
or a regret
I felt it in the whispers
of the morning breeze
then in an instant
they were gone

© bj smith
aka shallimarRose

Fate or Fiction

Silhouette in Shackles

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Age, Memories, Poetry, Ponder, Searching, Shallimarrose, Silhouette, Wondering

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author avatar shallimarRose
Born Barbara Ann poet/lyricist.
poetry with compassion, rhyme free verse & some romance/mild erotuca..
married w children

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author avatar Don Rothra
26th Apr 2012 (#)

Nice work

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author avatar shallimarRose
26th Apr 2012 (#)

thanks Don.. shallimar

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author avatar Buzz
26th Apr 2012 (#)

Lovely thoughts, SR.

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author avatar shallimarRose
26th Apr 2012 (#)

Thank you Buzz, shallimar

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author avatar BOB the DOG
26th Apr 2012 (#)

Lovely poem,. shallimar

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author avatar shallimarRose
26th Apr 2012 (#)

Thank you Bob... shallimarRose

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author avatar hussainanchal
5th May 2012 (#)

Whispers of the morning breeze bring in many memories of a long past..and Rose is a great poet to write such lines.

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author avatar shallimarRose
5th May 2012 (#)

thank you Hussain.. xoxo

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