Random Ravings Or So It Seems..Seen on Wikinut

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 3rd Jun 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1xtwbc2m/
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We have so many wonderful caring light writers here on this blessed site who set marvellous examples to others. We also have those who preach bigotry and darkness and this is all about them. A far departure from my usual pages but sometimes we just have to say it as it is.....

Edges of Eternity

Along the edges of eternity She flew
Beyond where time came to an end
The coming of a Golden Age is hence
Where loving is the only way

Deeply She mourned for those
Who could not enter in
Their wrongdoings had mounted up
Barring Kingdoms of Heaven from them

She knew one day they could enter
Into the Heart of God again
When their sins had been remitted
Forgiveness such a powerful tool

They Are Here

Yet still they would not change
When faced with such dolour
Preferred their quest for power and control
Trampling all who came their way

Their egos pride and malevolence
Shows up in their eyes
The ways they talk and write and speak
Vicious people they are

Found they are most every day
All places can they be seen
Their energy corrupt
Faces dark with negativity
No light shines in their eyes

On Wikinut

So many people now I see
On pages of this blessed site
Bible spouting hell and damnation
Rantings that just aren't nice
All thoughts of loving left behind
Where I do not know


It will be interesting to read
The comments placed hereon
For those of whom I write about
Defend themselves they will
By criticizing me

I do not really care at all
If I did I would not write so



and so it is.....

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read more of my pages from erotica to spirituality and everything inbetween by clicking on cnwriter at top of this page and here more
hereChoose Well the One You Follow
hereOde to Good and Evil
hereWhat Goes Around..Comes Around...
hereLight versus Darkness
website: http://carolan328.wix.com/cnwriter

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Carolan Nathan, Cnwriter, Forgiveness, Heaven, Loving, Random, Ravings, Thee

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar Nadia Zahar
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

This is a wonderful way to vent the frustration the bogotry and intolerance put us trough, how amazing it is to be able to arouse such beatiful words from the sands of evil...

Great job :)

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

thank you so much Nadia..blessings..

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

Timely words which one might hope would be taken to heart by all internet writers and commentators. Thank you cnwriter.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

they probably will not Steve..thank you for moderating this and the star....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

oh and for the person who continually leaves rantings on my pages which I always delete..here is what someone wrote about you:

What can I say, Lady Aiyanna is a textbook arrogant Aries, not a highly evolved one like you .. Just keep deleting her and maybe she'll get the message.

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Jun 2013 (#)

SHE IS AN OUTSIDER RIDING ON WIKI
WITHOUT FEAR
AND SHE KNOWS WIKI CAN DO NOTHING TO HER SO WE DELETE AND CONTINUE
AND SHE KNOWS
we all are helpless ...
she's been on my back
since times immemorial
who is she heaven knows
and WIKI DOES...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
5th Jun 2013 (#)

wow my friend...that is a pretty intense comment...glad you put it up...namaste

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author avatar Mariah
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

Timely words indeed Carolan.
If you can't be respectful in commenting, then don't comment at all, and if you don't like the author's style then don't read the articles!
retain respect for others, even if you don't agree with their views, don't take the use of a word 'personally' if your understanding of that word use is limited, and if you want to write, then bloody well
write a page of your own.
Mariah.

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Jun 2013 (#)

WIKI SHOULD COLLECT ALL SUCH views
and post it she may read it

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

yeah to all of that my lady...thank you for your loving support as well...

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author avatar Mariah
3rd Jun 2013 (#)

And to you also my friend xx

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author avatar Retired
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Powerful and mincing no words. Amazing.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Well Rajan I have a tendency to say it As It IS...it is my pioneer spirit and my daring to go where angels do not....so lots of light to me and you FTHG....

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author avatar Buzz
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Admirable, love. You tell it like it is.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

I know and sometimes it might not always be such a good idea!!!! xox

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author avatar Shirley Shuler
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Nods to you cn, you said what needed to be said...hugs

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

oh wow Shirley thank you...I know you like me believe in things many others do not...blessings...

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author avatar Rania, Jamie & Reni
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Wonderful Carolan!

Rania Seila

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

thank you so much Rania...blessings to you and yours....

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author avatar Oscar Crawford Media
4th Jun 2013 (#)

What an awesome soul you are!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

wow thank you Oscar...so appreciate your reading and leaving a comment...

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
4th Jun 2013 (#)

There is destructive criticism cn and constructive criticism ...I would not choose to give the first at any time , but I have received both many times . Hopefully the latter has made me wiser .
God bless you my friend .
Stella >I<

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

i know what you say Stella..i think the same way..blessings to you my friend.. xox

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author avatar madugundurukmini
4th Jun 2013 (#)

very nice

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

thank you...

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author avatar Songbird B
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Well said my friend..No one likes to be preached to whatever their beliefs..Respect doesn't cost a penny, but means the world and can sometimes be sadly lacking.. \0/x

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

yep Bev..sometimes life can be not so easy...lots of loving to you...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Some people view our blessed planet and those who inhabit it with distrust and revel in negativity. They feel by injuring others by deeds and hitting them below the belt with words is bravery. But all the time they accumulate negative karma. Thanks Carolina for your forthright, may I say, admonition? siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

well said my friend! you once again hit the nail on the head....namaste

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author avatar Delicia Powers
4th Jun 2013 (#)

The heart of your poetry cn, is light...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Yes and I am glad you see that Delicia my friend...lol...

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author avatar Trillionaire
4th Jun 2013 (#)

Thank you.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
4th Jun 2013 (#)

always my pleasure...

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Jun 2013 (#)

you alone are you
too good
it's below my level of knowledge
to comment
but praise I can ... cnw

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
5th Jun 2013 (#)

thank you for the praise then...

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author avatar Vartika
5th Jun 2013 (#)

I hope the message reaches people who this is meant for...
You are great Carolan

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author avatar Terry Trainor
5th Jun 2013 (#)

We live in a world where people hurt each other and turn away from people that are deemed lessor people. Then stand in their church and bow to their own greatness!

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author avatar Mariah
5th Jun 2013 (#)

We do indeed Terry
Mariah

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
5th Jun 2013 (#)

yes my friend...but they will get their commuppance just as that nasty little man did in The Mummy!!! oh ho ho!!!!

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