Rebirth

AnnH By AnnH, 20th Mar 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/38lh2hpj/
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This poem is about letting go your old belief system that is no longer working or serving you.........

Getting rid of outdated systems

Layers upon layers
barriers upon barriers
walls upon walls
what is she filling?
or what is she not shedding?

Fears upon fears
tears upon tears
regrets upon regrets
memories which should
be long lost

But confused, twisted
with turmoil, lost in gloom
when will this flower bloom?
or when will it breakthrough?

But fallen, burnt,
consumed by her own ashes
her tears are now dried
by the blazing fire
of the sun

A recharge phoenix
will arise from this
with new wings
ready to take flight

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Belief System, Letting Go, Personal Growth, Personal Story, Regeneration, Restoration

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author avatar AnnH
I'm a Freelance Writer, my writing interest include business, women issues, relationships, health issues, travel,music and entertainment, poetry and
other topics that stimulate my interest.

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author avatar MarilynDavisatTIERS
20th Mar 2014 (#)

Good afternoon, Gemstar, nicely done. Good reminder of rising again. Thank you for writing this. ~Marilyn

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author avatar AnnH
20th Mar 2014 (#)

Thanks Marilyn for your encouraging words......

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
20th Mar 2014 (#)

Very nice.

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author avatar AnnH
20th Mar 2014 (#)

Thank you Steve....

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author avatar Songbird B
20th Mar 2014 (#)

Really liked this Gemstar..Thank you for an enjoyable read my friend..\0/x

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author avatar AnnH
20th Mar 2014 (#)

Thank you Songbird....

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
21st Mar 2014 (#)

Nice poem!

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author avatar AnnH
24th Mar 2014 (#)

Thank you Fern

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
22nd Mar 2014 (#)

Powerful poem, Gemstar. One has to reinvent ourselves in every way, even clutch on straws, to survive in hostile environs - siva

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author avatar AnnH
24th Mar 2014 (#)

Thanks Siv, personal growth is very important....

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author avatar Delicia Powers
22nd Mar 2014 (#)

Beautiful...

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author avatar AnnH
24th Mar 2014 (#)

Thanks Delicia, I think your poems are very inspirational.....

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author avatar Delicia Powers
25th Mar 2014 (#)

..and as are always yours Gemstarr...this was a smile received from you when one was much needed... And appreciated...thank you Gemstar.

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