Red Gift

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 13th Sep 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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Young soul, don´t be afraid of enjoying this little gift

Sweet and Tender...

Little ruby,
shining bright like a
beautiful red star.
Isn´t it really lovely?

It´s waiting for you,
To put your lips on it
And get drunk
On that sweet honey.

Enjoy it slowly.
Take your time
To discover
The flavor of pleasure.

Tell me, young soul,
Is your heart beating faster?
Is your mouth suddenly aching
For a tender kiss?

I can feel your heart
Racing like crazy,
Wanting to get a taste
Of this forbidden fruit.

Young soul, don´t be afraid.
What you are feeling is
A burning desire
To be loved.

Let it take you
To unknown places,
Where there is no shame
For following your heart´s
Wishes and commands.

You are still young,
And there´s still time
To free yourself from
Any silly fears that kept you
In the most absolute darkness.

Little and perfect ruby,
Sparkling only for you,
A young man who is
Just starting to live.
Are you going to let go to waste?
Are you going to lie?
Or, for a change,
Are you going to be
Totally true to yourself?
Please, let me know.
I need to know
If you are ready
To overcome any
Past fears.
Just… let me know…
My soul needs to know it.

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Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar brendamarie
16th Sep 2015 (#)

wonderful poem, my dear

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author avatar snerfu
16th Sep 2015 (#)

good thoughts nice meaning

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author avatar Deepizzaguy
17th Sep 2015 (#)

I like the poem that you wrote. It is just so sweet and positive.

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
18th Sep 2015 (#)

Nice poem!

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
20th Sep 2015 (#)

A well written poem. Although not young now, I still savor the bliss of a kiss.

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