Romantic night

geetbhim123 By geetbhim123, 21st Oct 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

This is a Haiku poetry that is 5/7/5 syllable count.

Love

You me and moonlight

cool breeze dancing near sea shore

with you forever

Main origin of haiku is in japan

Haiku is all about nature and do not rhyme. It contains three short lines,all together 17 syllable.
First line contains 5 syllable
Second line contains 7 syllable
Third line again contains 5 syllable.

Inspiration

This is my first haiku inspired when I saw a lovely couple in pondycherry beach. I was inspired to write this LOVE poem.
It was great to see them together this love birds.
I like to write Haiku poem.

Tags

Haiku, Haiku Poems, Haiku Poetry

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author avatar geetbhim123
love traveling,reading books,
get many more new ideas when I am alone.

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author avatar Sheila Newton
13th Nov 2011 (#)

Lovely, lovely Haiku. I've decided to follow you. You might be interested in following me too? Perhaps?

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author avatar Sheila Newton
13th Nov 2011 (#)

Now I see you ARE following me. Excellent. Nice to be friends, hmm?

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author avatar geetbhim123
14th Nov 2011 (#)

yes sheila i am here to learn new things.ya nice to be a friends.

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author avatar Retired
15th Nov 2011 (#)

You said quite a bit in a few short lines. I think Flash Fiction would be a GREAT interest to you... I TOTALLY lack the ability to sum up. lol, I'm a talker. Nice to meet you, Geet.

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author avatar geetbhim123
6th Dec 2011 (#)

thanks silas for the read.

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author avatar vpaulose
4th Dec 2011 (#)

Very interesting Geetbhim. Would you please be my friend?

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author avatar geetbhim123
6th Dec 2011 (#)

thank you very much vpaulose for a read, nice to be your friend

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author avatar vpaulose
22nd Nov 2012 (#)

Nice haiku. I have written some here. May I know your opinion?

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