Seeing

grey By grey, 12th Jun 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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It is in the darkness of closed eyes that we make the most awesome dreams.

Freedom to dream wild

Is it with eyes open?
With bright revealing lights?
That free you of the uncertainty?
of the chilling dark of night?

It is with a questioning gaze?
To calculate and gauge?
That shape beyond the haze?
To hedge a worrisome fate?

No.

It is when eyes are closed.

When we crawl and grope
And stumble and choke.
And cry and joke.
Then laugh and cry.
And bump our heads
And curse and sigh
Then crawl and grope
And stumble and choke
Inching
by and by.

In the dark.
Fearless. Unreserved.
Free to dream wild.
Free to dream wild.

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Dream, Dreams, Eyes, Free, Freedom, See, Seeing, Wikinut, Writing

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author avatar grey
I write to remember that not very long ago, I believed that the teru-teru bozu would keep the rain away.

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author avatar Shaunak
12th Jun 2012 (#)

Wow, nice play with words..

" In the dark.
Fearless. Unreserved.
Free to dream wild "

Love these lines especially

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author avatar grey
16th Jun 2012 (#)

thank you. i wanted the words to bounce. haha.

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author avatar vpaulose
13th Jun 2012 (#)

Interesting verses. Thank you Grey.

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author avatar grey
16th Jun 2012 (#)

Thank you for dropping by.:)

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