Jeremiah Castelo By Jeremiah Castelo, 15th Dec 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A poem about excavating the willpower, however deeply within your spirit it may be buried, to overcome the adversity presented before you

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My shoulders are well oiled axles,
my fists are cannon balls
I am an uncompromised,
and unchallenged fresh breath of boldness
I am the statue of fastholding,
chiseled down from black diamond by the strong hand of craftsmanship
I am chaos's more stable second cousin,
and favored uncle to the prodigals, the profligates, the princes, and the prodigies
I am the lion's heart beat,
the war drum's sporadic syncopation
I am the wolf pack's collective sixth and seventh senses,
keen on the scent of blood, fear, and impending annihilation
I will not sway to the breath of your voice
nor will I stagger at the wind your weather weaves
Advance upon me and find yourself hard pressed against calloused intolerance,
behind which is a wall,
and behind that wall,
an army
I pray you combust into flames and feathers at once should my name birth from your lips
I pray my night guardsmen have eyes of eagles,
and my trumpeteers have breaths of behemoths should you ever encroach upon my camp at dreaming hour
I promise to empress upon you pressure,
of a nature that spawns pearls, magma, and passionate revolution
But the only revolution that will come of your resistance is vertigo,
as you spiral downward into abysmal forgottenness
Now heed my words with intent lest you risk the fate of faded bewilderment
May God be my strength as I destroy you
Eviscerate you
Annihilate you
I will obliterate you until the only remnant of your very existence
is but a vague memory,
of a fleeting idea,
in a dream,
inside a dream,
inside a coma.

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Conflict, Heart, Mental Toughness, Overcoming Adversity, Struggle, Willpower

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Jeremiah Castelo is a songwriter, poet, and painter from Los Angeles, CA

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author avatar Avaysa
16th Dec 2013 (#)

nicely written

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author avatar Jeremiah Castelo
16th Dec 2013 (#)

Why thank you Avaysa

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