She Cries

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 24th Oct 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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A young girl cries, dreaming of a love she has not meet yet. Is there any hope for her?

A girl is crying

A girl on her knees
is begging for something
she can't have.
Bitter tears fall down
from her brown eyes
as she realizes nobody
is listening to her.
Why can't she have
a little bit of tenderness?
Being born on
a humble household
is not excuse for the world
to treat her like a ghost.
She does exist,
and inside her young heart,
there are one thousand
dreams waiting to become true.
The young lady
spends her life in a darkness
she never wanted
by her side.
And yet,
against all odds,
she still believes
that out there,
somebody caring
is waiting for her,
to love her so deeply,
and to show her
that she deserves
to be treated with
absolute tenderness.
What if others treat her
like a crazy person?
She knows that
there are better things
waiting for her.
Pain will be over
sooner than expected.

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Girl, Heartache, Heartbreak, Poem, Poem On Life, Poem On Love, Young, Young Lady, Young Lass

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar brendamarie
25th Oct 2015 (#)

great poem!!!

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
29th Oct 2015 (#)

Interesting post!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
30th Oct 2015 (#)

Thanks for reading!

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