She's Gone Off Her Rocker

debdebbdebby By debdebbdebby, 21st Mar 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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She's Gone Off Her Rocker... this is one i have been playing with for a few days, what inspires me on this is sometimes the things -- not that we think -- but that of which we write and i say to myself -- well she done went off her rocker --- believe it or not i say it about my self too--so as you read everyone can think -- am i writing about you???lol thanks for reading -- enjoy!!

She's Gone Off Her Rocker

a little sanity
can go a long way
shes off her rocker
a sensitive soul
she can dish
but can she take the cruel cold
halfway here
close the windows
close the doors
pull down the blinds
double lock the locks
watch the clock
quiet please
tick tock -tick tock
did ya ever see time fly
tick tock -tick tock
zooming right on bye
shes gone off her rocker

Well she done went off her rocker,
lit a torch
that consumed
her lifes sanity
That left her so crazily

The saddest part is she still wants to go home
But her home isnt home anymore
just a piece of land filled with rubble
no closets filled with pretty clothing
no walls left with the intricate moldings

Well she done went off her rocker
lit a torch
that consumed
her lifes sanity
and left her so crazily

The saddest part is she still thinks of home
she forgot about the ashes
that burnt to solid black
she forgot her companion
died of a heart attack
her visits are with absence
for one to see her presence

Shes done gone off her rocker
got a little crazy
says she's halfway here!
Close the windows and the doors !
A sensitive soul
but can not take the cruel cold!
And we all get a little wild
But sooner or later reconcile
to the truth and not denial
of reality's fate
which just saturates
lifes daily news

Well she done went off her rocker
cock- a doodle doo--
I heard she flew................................By Debby Glennon


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author avatar foxpete88
22nd Mar 2011 (#)

thanks4 sharing.-

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author avatar D in The Darling
22nd Mar 2011 (#)

This is another beautiful piece. You're just good. Keep them coming. I'm your fan for life.

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author avatar vpaulose
25th Mar 2011 (#)

An interesting and informative article. Thank you debdebbdebby.

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author avatar Denise O
1st Apr 2011 (#)

Deb, maybe I have taken this poem wrong but, it made me laugh, I think it was because, you stated at first it might be about me, the reader and I almost think I am off my rocker at times. Nice read. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar debdebbdebby
1st Apr 2011 (#)

lol too funny -- glad you enjoyed this...i need to get into this mood of writing more often...and thank you for sharing your time

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