PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 3rd Nov 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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That night was totally magical, and no one was going to steal away from them its beautiful memory.

What a night!

It was like a fire blast. So raw, so intense and… full of life. Nobody expected it to hit them so hard, but it happened. Such a small moment made everyone feel a little bit more alive, without having to take any kind of those weird substances that mess with the human mind. There was not more time for filling the mind with those dark thoughts that sometimes consume the light of our soul. Such a perfect moment had a beat to go with it, and that sound was… truly heavenly. The people danced all over the place as if they were possessed by something from high above. Tomorrow, the people who lived such a magical experience, would have to get back to their normal existences, where there´s almost no room for the excitement brought by a magical night like that, where simple musicians, mere human beings without any weird kind of magical power, managed to heal some hundreds of poor souls by playing them a bit of rhythmic music.
But who could care about something so distant and blurry like the future? The music on the place was amazing, so, why not enjoy the night? The souls dancing to the magnetic rhythm of the music were still too young to spend their precious time by drowning themselves on a very dark pit filled with sadness and strong regrets created by their own families.

The morning light might bring to some a few memories filled with a bit of drunken regret, so what? No one, not even an angry father or a nagging mother, could steal away from the heart of those young concertgoers the lingering memories of a night where the only thing that really mattered for those who wanted to fit in, was having a soul filled with bubbliness of youth.

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Concert, Dancing, Life, Music, Night, Short Fiction, Short Story, Short-Story, Youth

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Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
5th Nov 2014 (#)

Awesome post!

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5th Nov 2014 (#)


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author avatar tafmona
8th Nov 2014 (#)

thanks a lot for sharing this

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
8th Nov 2014 (#)

Thank YOU for reading

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