marie79729 By marie79729, 23rd Jun 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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People are very quick to make judgements,the outer appearance of someone can be very misleading..........inner qualities matter.


Bad apple,rotten to the core,
Tossed to the side,not needed any more
Smell's putrid, bashed and bruise
Cost is nothing,consumers refused.

Seeds within holding all potential,
Materials needed, growth is essential,
To reproduce life,all elements required,
Water's nourishing, seeds once retired.

Halved in two,giving life a chance,
Seek within in order to advance,
On the outsides layers are dead,
Holes remain where maggots once fed,

Now the secrete has been discovered,
Layers stripped,the souls uncovered,
What once was lifeless,lacking juice,
Unfolds now,can be of use.

Observers all become intrigued,
Seeing their mistake indeed,
Wanting now to make amends,
Perhaps too late that depends.

They judged too quick they did not see,
The wonder that lies within me,
The old,the damaged,soon repaired,
The love inside still being shared.

So next time when,you make a call,
The pictures bigger,look at it all,
Beauty rarely is skin deep,
The inner harvest what you reap.


Inner Self, Judge, Judgements, Love

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author avatar Utah Jay
23rd Jun 2014 (#)

I hear you...Well said

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author avatar WOGIAM
23rd Jun 2014 (#)

I think it is in human nature to jump to conclusions and judge others based on what they see, only the wise take time to study people before judging them.

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author avatar marie79729
5th Jul 2014 (#)

Well said.

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