Take Me

Randhir Bechoo By Randhir Bechoo, 21st Jun 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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A guy wants acceptance from a girl,he wants to be close.He has fallen in love with her.He knows his feelings are true and wants her to know.

Love Poem


Take Me

Take me girl as I am.If I am not owned by you I will be all alone.I don't want you to only exist in my mind and heart,I want you to make me yours.Girl,I am waiting for your acceptance.I will find no solace in the world if I don't have you as my own.Take me girl and give me all you got,I am looking for love that you have in you.

Oh! take me girl I am all alone amongst the crowds that walk this world.The very first time I saw you I accepted the reality of love.I cannot take my mind of you,I cannot live without the thought of you.Take me into your heart,I want to reside in your love.I promise to give all my love,a promise that you will see nothing in me but you.

Take me into your arms.Oh! hold me tight,I want to feel the warmth of your love.Give me all you got,I want your love forever.With you sweetness my want is true,I don't want to ride the wave of love,I want to sink deep.I will reside in the depths of love taking in the splendour and enjoying every moment.Take me to the soul of your being,the very source of your life.I want to love every bit of you.

Randhir Bechoo

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Deep Love, Happiness, Love And Desire, Love And Soul, Love At First Sight, Love Poem, Solace

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
I live in South Africa,Durban.Enjoy writing in my spare time as well as watching movies and listening to music.I also practice yoga.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
21st Jun 2014 (#)

shut up you silly woman...and thank you Randhir for this piece....

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

Thank you Carolina

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

The lady that gave the comment before you Carolina misunderstand men.She feel men are only after one thing which is so incorrect.She generalise to much.

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author avatar LOVERME
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

This is one of your best ones I have read so far...
Let not others sad remarks bother ...
I have been deleting now 4 over four years ...
wish you best my dear ....
your poetry does one's heart endear

ALL THE BEST unique poetry tis

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

Thank you for your comment.

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author avatar M G Singh
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

nice post Randhir

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

Thank you Madan

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

Nice one Randhir!

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
22nd Jun 2014 (#)

Thank you Fern

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author avatar WOGIAM
23rd Jun 2014 (#)

Excellent use of words to convey the emotions, Well done.

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
29th Jun 2014 (#)

Thank you

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author avatar Utah Jay
24th Jun 2014 (#)

I really like the way you put this together...Thanks for your post.

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
29th Jun 2014 (#)

Thank you

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
29th Jun 2014 (#)

Love makes life worth living - siva

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author avatar Kingwell
13th Jul 2014 (#)

Another good post my friend. Blessings.

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author avatar Randhir Bechoo
19th Jul 2014 (#)

Thank you friend for your lovely comments.

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