Tattered me

ITgirl1011 By ITgirl1011, 9th Sep 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Have you ever loved someone who made you do things you didn't even imagine you'd do in a lifetime? Someone who can make you very happy but in a split second, can make you feel the saddest person on Earth?

You had me..

You made me the happiest person yesterday.
You made me the saddest today.

You picked me up, then you decided to put me down
You promised to catch me, every time I fall
You inspired me, then you sucked out that inspiration in me
You whisper words I want to hear
but they contrast to the actions you make me feel
You make me feel so alive yet so dead
You tell me you love me, but you can't even find me.

Don't we all just want to find someone who can accept our differences, and failures but can love us at the same time? We may not know it, maybe we had already met the love of our life. Maybe that girl who was with the train with you the other day, or the lady who was running and bumped to you, or the girl who cried at the news. Who knows? We can't tell, it's just destiny.


Broken Heart, Broken Heart Poem, Broken Hearted, Broken Hearts, Broken Homes, Broken Love, Broken Promises, Broken Relationship, Brokenness

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I am a working student. I focus more on life problems and where else my mind wanders.

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author avatar LOVERME
9th Sep 2014 (#)

yield not to the machinations of young guys they only beguile test them before they help themselves and ruin a gal or woman and that too as a young one ..
Take not anyone especially youthful charming guys whose brains are tuned towards women there and by now you ought to know where Stay tuned and let your mind not go astray men sweet nothings in ears do bray and when you have had all your hay they feel you have become happy and gay then guys all, okay most of them then just lay that's why until this day I say every day don't let a guy flatter you as it seems so easy still
nowadays gals fall and let them lay hoping they will not with another stay but sad to say those days have since gone long away today is =ts like hi and bye when you both have had your fun twas consensual all say the why brood today good he ran away but friendly young gals be aware and from such guys do stay away but then who am I to say what you should do tis your own inimitable way I can only render free advice today s I have always..
it's you body your decision so soundly with guys do play lest they lay

now remove this if u may...

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author avatar ITgirl1011
10th Sep 2014 (#)

Very true LOVERME..

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
10th Sep 2014 (#)

Everyone comes as a package - we should accept the whole being in good grace and not try to use them to suit us - siva

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author avatar nature.luv
11th Sep 2014 (#)

Very few can differentiate between Infatuation and Love especially in young age. Infatuation fades out but true love clings on and flourishes with time.

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