The Building of Nothing...The Fall Into The Sea...a Fantasy

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 20th Jul 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2kpm-guq/
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Whatever your choices are they can always be changed...however whatever your creations they will return to you one way or the other to be dealt with accordingly....not my law...the Law of Karmic Return....

The Choosing

Not really knowing where to go
The woman took upon herself to choose
A place where only buildings grew
On pavements rimmed in salt and sod
Straight from the sea

In front of houses thundered waves
Crashing down so heavily
Through attics water poured
Drowning all inside


Upon her face her cherry lips
Puckered in the wind that blew
Her eyebrows brushes of black hair
Over nose and eyes did grow

Forgotten Knowledge

Smart words tumbled from her mouth
Insulting all who came her way
Yet filled with wisdoms so they were
Revealing knowledge ancient lore
Forgotten now by most but not by her

A book of pages to be turned
Each one a story told
Some as dark as raven's wings
Others spoke of other things
Known by very few were they

Shedding Time

Kept in line by shedding time
Finding ways to come and go
Twixt heaven and earth land and sea
Reserves of russet apples be
Green ones hanging from the tree

Dark circles reaching down to meet
Cheese like moon up in the sky
Circling earth each every night
Keeping lovers in constant sight
In case they break apart


A young girl so very sweet
In basket blue places her flowers
Her hat over her eyes does shade
This pretty little maid

Spirit Leaves

Oh so fragile all are we
Splinters shedding gradually
Till nothing remains to be seen
White bones everywhere are strewn

Flurry of air seemingly does leave
When last breath you do take
Spirit returning whence it came
Nothing but a bag of bones is left
And all that dwelt within

Law of Maat

Where you will go
Predicated it on
The way this lifetime
You have been

No need to moan and groan
Unfairness you think may be
What you create through words and deeds
Returned to you will be

Justice will have its way indeed
The Law of Maat proceeds
Harmony balance in every way
The road to heaven leads


and so it is....

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Building, Carolan Nathan, Choices, Cnwriter, Fall, Karma, Laws, Maat, Nothing, Sea

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar timwilliams
20th Jul 2013 (#)

A Spirituality of the soul penetrates deep into the minds of man with every verse you pen.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
20th Jul 2013 (#)

wow that is a pretty profound comment Tim....thank you

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
20th Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Peter for the star page ..never for granted taken...always well pleased for work it takes to create with the correct expertise of pictures and music..

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author avatar Connie McKinney
20th Jul 2013 (#)

Lovely as usual, Carolina.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
20th Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Connie..blessings...

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author avatar Trillionaire
21st Jul 2013 (#)

So beautiful.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
21st Jul 2013 (#)

and many thanks to you..

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author avatar M G Singh
21st Jul 2013 (#)

Lots of philosophy in this poem. Very nice

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
21st Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Madan...

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author avatar wonder
21st Jul 2013 (#)

Very evocative and yet down to earth. Your poem here bounced up and down to earth
beautifully.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
21st Jul 2013 (#)

thank you wonder...it was quite a ride to write....blessings...

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author avatar Delicia Powers
23rd Jul 2013 (#)

Very creative beautiful cn....

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
23rd Jul 2013 (#)

thank you Delicia...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
23rd Jul 2013 (#)

True justice in the end - that is the way it should be. We reap what we sow - much needed reassurance. Thanks Carolina for another inimitable poem - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
23rd Jul 2013 (#)

and thank you siva for your knowing...

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