The Christmas Party Dress - A Poem

blackangelwings By blackangelwings, 23rd Nov 2010 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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A poem that tells of the 'relationship' between a party dress in a shop and the buyer.

The Christmas Party Dress

You winked at me,
You ambushed my eye.
Transformation promised
Like pupa to butterfly.

You reeled me in
Like the fish on a line,
Promising awakened interest
This party time.

Admiring glances,
As held in the queue.
I feel anticipation thinking of our party debut

In the changing room mirror,
You take my breath away.
This party time
Men will be easy prey.

You skim my body a perfect fit ,
Like thoroughbreds,those masculine suitors
Will be straining at the bit.

Tracing my curves, like a glove
Enticing eager husbands
Not looking for love.

Maybe the graduate on the ground floor,
A lustful look with open jaw.
Head of finance? who can tell
Where you'll cast your illusion spell?

We leave together, a last glance at your empty rail
A dinner hour gone'
Erotic thoughts of men we'll impale.

You'll entice a world of lust and deceit,
Well worth the price
On your receipt.


Celebrations, Christmas, Clothing, Dress, Party, Shopping Centre, Shopping Spree

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author avatar blackangelwings
Hi, I have lived all my life in the beautiful county of Gloucestershire in England. I love to write especially poems. I write for fun and to relax but some of my subjects may seem dark. I seem to have the ability to write down and share ideas about ...(more)

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author avatar Denise O
23rd Nov 2010 (#)

Well done. Loved it!
Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar blackangelwings
23rd Nov 2010 (#)

thankyou so much! it was fun to write and when i woke up the first few lines were already in my head. love and light. :)

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author avatar oldsoul
23rd Nov 2010 (#)

hi janette, its martin from facebook, I love your poems :) x

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author avatar blackangelwings
24th Nov 2010 (#)

thanks martin. I am enjoying sharing my thoughts.lovenlightxx

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author avatar Katrina
24th Dec 2010 (#)

Very nice poem. Well done!

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author avatar blackangelwings
25th Dec 2010 (#)

thankyou so much. glad you liked it. A Merry Christmas To You.

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