The Constant Chatter Chapter One

Kingwell By Kingwell, 12th May 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I am a baby boy who has left heaven to come to the earth. Like others I chose my parents and family before leaving and I am accompanied here by my two angels who have promised that they will never leave me. I chatter away as I await my birth, then realize that I am about to be born.

I Await My Birth Into The Earth Plane.

So this is what it feels like when you enter matter! Wow! It’s much denser than I thought it would be. It’s nice and comfortable here though, I feel all warm and cozy and already I feel loved but where’s that noise coming from? Oh yes, that’s just mommy’s heartbeat, I was told about that. Look all my friends are waving at me. They know how excited I am about this journey. They will all be along later but some of course, are already on earth, like my mommy here, now she has always been my very special friend, although she’s forgotten about me now. See, my angels are smiling at me, they’re watching over me making sure that everything is okay and I don’t get frightened. After I’m on earth I’ll only be able to see them for a little while, and then I’ll forget all about them. That makes me feel sad because I don’t want to forget them but they tell me that it‘s all right because they’ll always be there, even though I won’t see them. Anyway, I’ll be coming back home again someday and I’ll be able to see them then. I’m going to be a boy when I’m finished growing and when all of me is complete, I’ll be born into the world, isn’t that exciting? There are so many things I want to do there, I’ll run and jump and have loads of fun. Oh, my angels are telling me that I shouldn’t get so excited, I have to rest and sleep, just rest and sleep until I’m ready to be born.

In Mommy's Arms

My, I sleep a lot don’t I? That’s all I do is sleep, sleep, sleep. My angels are smiling again, I think they’re trying to make me smile… no … that comes later. I can still see some of my friends, but I think some of them have left already. Oh look! Jerry is back and Irene and Sarah…and there’s Tony and Harold. Oh oh, something is happening, what’s that? I’m ready to be born! Where are my angels? Oh there they are, they’re telling me not to be frightened … easy for them to say, they don’t have to experience this. … Owe! That’s not a very good way to welcome anyone. I’m crying! I’m crying! I’ve never cried before … at least I don’t think so. Now this is better… those arms, those loving arms, I just know it’s my mommy’s arms … I could stay here for ever. Wait! I want to see her, I want to look into her eyes, I want to see if she’ll remember me. Oh my, what’s wrong with my eyes? They won’t stay open at all … guess I’ll have to save that stare for later. You’ll have to excuse me, I’m really really sleepy – can’t keep my eyes open at all … good night.
TO BE CONTINUED See Chapter Two

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Angels, Beginnings, Being Born, Earth Plane, Excited, Friends, Growing, Health, Kingwell, Matter, Mommys Arms, Mommys Eyes, Mommys Heartbeat, Nice And Comfortable, Noise, Scared, Sleepy, Special Friend, Warm And Cozy

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I am 75 years old and retired.I like writing short stories, poetry as well other articles of interest.

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
12th May 2015 (#)

I'm loving this story! and I can't wait for more!

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author avatar Kingwell
12th May 2015 (#)

Thanks Steve, I hope you follow and enjoy it to the end. Blessings.

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author avatar Retired
12th May 2015 (#)

That's a really good story, and looking forward to reading more. Well done. =)

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author avatar Kingwell
12th May 2015 (#)

Thanks Coffee Queen. Hope you continue to follow. Blessings.

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author avatar Retired
12th May 2015 (#)

Great story!

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author avatar Kingwell
12th May 2015 (#)

Thanks CM. Blessings.

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author avatar Carol Roach
12th May 2015 (#)

wow this is a very un-que story beginning. Have you been following my heart of a man short story I would love your opinion

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author avatar Kingwell
12th May 2015 (#)

Thank you Carol and I hope you continue to follow. Sorry but I haven't been following that particular story but I will do. I'm flattered that you would like my opinion. Blessings.

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author avatar spirited
13th May 2015 (#)

You tell it like you've been there, done that, a great start to your story Kingwell.

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author avatar Kingwell
13th May 2015 (#)

Thank you spirited. The whole thing seems to flow naturally from me. Hope you follow as I think you might enjoy this. Blessings.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
16th May 2015 (#)

I also have similar thoughts and feelings about birth Kingwell. We will never be abandoned and that gives us also higher duties and responsibilities!

We make a choice where and who to we are born according to merit that we have accumulated "over time" - siva

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author avatar Kingwell
16th May 2015 (#)

Thanks for your thoughts Siva. Blessings.

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author avatar Helen Thomas
21st May 2015 (#)

Beautiful ~ Thanks for sharing ~ this article ~ Kingwell. The phrase which was expressed to the baby on its journey into birth "not to be frightened" is advice that ~ I believe ~ should really stay with us forever.

I'm looking forward to following this story.

May our Awesome God continue to bless and keep you.

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author avatar Kingwell
21st May 2015 (#)

Thank you for reading and commenting Helen. I agree "be not afraid" is good advice for the entire journey. Blessings.

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author avatar Shamarie
24th Jun 2015 (#)

Great start, Kingwell! I am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters!!!

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author avatar Kingwell
24th Jun 2015 (#)

Thank you Shamarie. I hope you will enjoy the whole story and I love getting comments. Blessings.

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