"The Dynamic Duo" The waiting game

Nancy CzerwinskiStarred Page By Nancy Czerwinski, 25th Aug 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Mom drove Robert to the corner gas station to make the anonymous police report. Molly went along for moral support. They are back home waiting for a news update on the underground garage. If there is anyone in the abandoned building, hopefully the first responders will find them.

The team waits for a news update

Molly was sitting in the family room with Milly. She had her pillows propped up just the way she liked them. Milly was sitting on the love seat with her favorite blanket. They were hoping for a news update on the abandoned building. Robert had gone home to get something to eat. He needed a break from all the undercover work. Milly had talked to Sally and promised that she would call if there was any news. Rusty was asleep upstairs.

A long afternoon

Dad was sitting in his TV room watching the stock market. He was waiting for a news update just like Molly and Milly. The stock market was taking a dive and for some reason Dad found that to be of interest. Molly had way more important things to think about. For one thing she wondered what would happen if the guys were still in the building. Was there a possibility that they would get in trouble? A much worse thought than that was what if they found out that Dad and the team had squealed on them? Would they come looking for them? Molly didn't have a plan for that. That could be very bad for the team.

The five o'clock news

At five o'clock there was breaking news. Molly and Milly both sat straight up to listen to what was being said by the newscaster. A picture of the abandoned garage flashed across the street. Molly knew the building well. They'd spent enough time there to recognize it on the TV screen. There were two men being carried out on stretchers. The rescue squad was taking them to the hospital. They appeared to be alive which was a very good thing. The bad part was that the underground garage had been discovered. Molly wondered what the plan was going to be. She was afraid the bad guys would come looking for the team. If they found out about Dad their lives could be in danger. Molly called Robert with the news update. Robert was very good at coming up with a plan.

Dad calls a meeting with the team

When the news was over Dad called for Molly to come upstairs. Milly followed Molly up the stairs. Dad motioned for Molly to come in his room. Milly stood in the doorway. It looked like Dad was upset. Dad looked at Molly and then he looked over at Milly. Molly's worst fears were realized at that moment. Dad said there had been an anonymous call to the house. It was a threat. Someone had figured out that the team had revealed the operation. Molly couldn't figure out how they had found out about the team. Molly thought they did a good job on covering their tracks. Dad told Molly to call the team together for a meeting.

To be continued...

"The Dynamic Duo" Molly and Milly are back in Jersey


"The Dynamic Duo" A plan of action

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Abandoned Building, Family Room, Home, News Report, Rescue, Television

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
I'm a mother and a grandmother. I love to write and be creative. If I can make one person smile I've done what I set out to do.

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Hello my dear Nancy, I'm back and writing like a madman, anyway enjoyed your wonderful posts, cheers!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Fern, thank you so much for the awesome comment. I'm so glad you are back. I missed you! I look forward to reading all your wonderful articles.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Mark, thank you so much for the moderation.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Surely there cannot be a snitch within this team. I am worried about Robert as he agreed to be the informer though Dad was behind the whole plan.

I do hope the good will prevail before the bad can strike, thanks Nancy - siva

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Siva, thank you so much for your wonderful comment. At this point I have no idea who the snitch could be. I think the team is in trouble though. Let's hope they get out of this without too much trouble.

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author avatar Carol Roach
26th Aug 2015 (#)

oh oh this is bad

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Carol, thank you so much for your comment. I think this is bad for the team. I wouldn't want to see anybody get hurt so let's hope the team comes up with a plan.

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author avatar peachpurple
26th Aug 2015 (#)

wow, it is time for plan B now....

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Peachpurple, thanks for the comment. You made me smile and I thank you for that. I think you are right and this would be a good time for plan B.

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author avatar brendamarie
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Nancy, very exciting!!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

brendamarie, thank you so much for your comment and for continuing to follow Molly, Milly and the team. I hope they come up with a good plan because I think at this time they are in danger.

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author avatar Shamarie
26th Aug 2015 (#)

I love the suspense at the end of this chapter, Nancy! Great job! I am looking forward to the next part!!!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Shamarie, thank you so very much for continuing to follow Molly, Milly and the team. You are the best! I'm so glad you like the suspense. I think the team may be in trouble.

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author avatar Sherri Granato
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Nothing like having a dog that can prop up pillows and give moral support. Once again you have excelled with your creativity.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Sherri, thank you so much for the comment. What in the world would I do without a friend like you! You are the best!

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author avatar Retired
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Uh oh, what do you watch...the stock market diving or the team threatened by revealing the operation. Oy!

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

LeRain, you are awesome! Thanks for the wonderful comment and for the smile!

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
26th Aug 2015 (#)

I am sure you will come up with a satisfactory solution to this latest problem, that will vindicate any of the team from being suspect as a snitch Nancy .
You always surprise us with unexpected twists in the tale ...so I am sure you will not disappoint us on this occasion either .
Many blessings to you yet again
Stella ><

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
26th Aug 2015 (#)

Stella, I love your comments! You are the best! The team is in trouble but Milly has pulled out her trusty sling shot and is prepared to use it. Blessings to you today and always.

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author avatar Kingwell
19th Sep 2015 (#)

Interesting! Have fun with the story! Blessings.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
19th Sep 2015 (#)

Kingwell, you are making my day! Thank you so much for reading all my stories. You are the best. Smiles and blessings to you today and always!

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