The Flower Died

PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 22nd Jan 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/1koq9bt2/
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Sadly, It was too late for the couple to try to rescue what was left of their love. The beautiful flower had died.

It was over...

That flower once blossomed,
Filling everything with its sweet scent,
Making their hearts felt caressed,
Helping them to forget any past torment.

They prayed for it to last forever,
Like on those romantic stories,
Where a never-ending sweetness-filled river,
Carries the lovers directly to the glory.


They dreamed of spending an eternity together,
Sharing one and the same vision of the world,
Together as one, even under bad weather,
Staying away from the pain that rested curled.

Their goal of harmony was so close!
And they were so sure to finally achieve it…
But their hope suddenly froze,
Suddenly drowning into a dark pit.


The monotony made them blind,
Leaving their hearts unable to see,
Forever lost into the gust of a fiery wind,
That erased what they were meant to be.

Sadly, there was no going back
Or a person willing to take the blame for them;
Their bond was about to crack,
Destroying their precious gem.

It was the product of their actions;
There was no way to deny it.
Devoured by mundane distractions,
That sent them to a dark pit.

The beautiful flower now looked withered,
With no even a little vital sign,
Dying on the shadow of a cruel winter,
That kept them away from the divine.

It was over.
This time, it really was over…

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Couple, Couple Relationships, Flower, Heartache, Heartbreak, Poem, Poem On Love, Sadness

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
22nd Jan 2015 (#)

I will take that flower to the world beyond and discover it better than before. Thank you for letting me know.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
22nd Jan 2015 (#)

Some truth is best kept within......

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author avatar GenkiWorld
22nd Jan 2015 (#)

wow i loved it, nice take on the rose story :) i imagined it from the pov of the couple, their hopes and how hard they tryed to save what was lost. i loved it!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
24th Jan 2015 (#)

I am really glad you like it!

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author avatar Shamarie
22nd Jan 2015 (#)

Love it!!!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
24th Jan 2015 (#)

Thanks!

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author avatar Carol Roach
23rd Jan 2015 (#)

so sad, the hardest thing sometimes to say is it's over

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
24th Jan 2015 (#)

Indeed, it is

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