The Isolated One

Daughter of Deity By Daughter of Deity, 2nd Feb 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL
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We all are different.Yet many of us tend to live and do things in the common way.We fear lest if we do things in our own unique way then it may be faulty.But we all have unique colour and taste.

The isolated one

A large group of birds
In the clear blue sky
I saw one day
Flying above very high.

With common ambitions
They tended forward,
With common policy,thoughts and beliefs,
They flied and flied onward.

But a little chick,just learnt
To fly didn't seen to like
This,who had a different idea
In spite of being alike.

So he did stop
And chose his own direction
And moved towards it
Denying all the common convention.

So he went isolated
And flied and flied and flied
But he found none of his kind
Yet not gave up but patiently he very hard tried.

Should I go back?
Would I ever meet them?
What should I do?
Such thoughts in his mind came.

There was wide clear sky
Stretched large before his eyes.
And there were mountains and clouds.
Oh! is the decision foolish or wise?

Has the bird done any wrong?
Has he spoiled his life?
He's set to shape his own world
Feeling in his mind a strange strife.

Now let's see
What does he
When he's free
In his long life journey.


Courage, Courage For, Courageous

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I love to ink down my feelings in form of verses.

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author avatar GenkiWorld
2nd Feb 2015 (#)

as a society we often behave like that and don't take well when others step out of a circle to seek their own path, but the bird might have chocen right for him.

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author avatar Carol Roach
3rd Feb 2015 (#)

yes do we really know what to do with our freedom

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author avatar Kingwell
20th Mar 2015 (#)

Lovely poem and very thought provoking. Congratulations on being author of the day! Blessings.

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author avatar BiristerSharma
20th Mar 2015 (#)

Great insight! Sometimes freedom leads nowhere, but nobody could live without freedom.

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author avatar Shamarie
20th Mar 2015 (#)

Lovely poem and congrats on being Author of the Day!!!

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