The Letter I Wrote (poem about a girl who gave up on waiting )

poemgur1980 By poemgur1980, 21st Nov 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/3bfwh9yo/
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the letter i wrote is how a guy who told his girl one day she would see how he is always there

the letter i wrote

i wrote you this letter then
pinned it to the wall .
left the house for a couple of
hours cause we hardly ever talk.

when i came back i noticed
it still there.
i told my self right then it's ok
cause he never show's he cares.


my heart gave up on alway's
waiting to see.
what's the next excuse that
he'll want me to believe.

so i crumbled the letter i wrote
then threw it in the trash.
gathered my thing's together
and said goodn bye at last.

turned off all the light's
while walking out the door.
tear's running down my cheek
cause im leaving him for sure.

i thought to myself ill be ok
he never noticed me.
at home or anywhere else
he alway's said id see.

got in my car and drove away
without looking back.
i needed a tissue to wipe my tear's
i found the letter i threw in the trash.

slammed on the brake's turned on
the light nothing in front or back.
rolled down my window threw it out
cause im all through with that.

drove away not knowing where to
go i pulled in at dad's church.
im so tired i closed my eye's my
husband's voice was the last i heard.

i woke up in his arm's as if it were
all a dream .
i look in his eye's while starting to cry
as he hand's me the letter i see.

the end.

by : rebecca elizabeth pineda

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Letter From The Heart, Letting Go, Waiting For Love, Waiting Love

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author avatar poemgur1980
my name is (Rebecca Elizabeth Jimenez) married name is (Pineda .)
Im 33 yrs old been writing poems since the age of 9 I write about feelings ,love,inspiration,hope all kinds of poetry

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author avatar Williamsji
21st Nov 2013 (#)

Good Write, Congrats, WILLIAMSJI

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
21st Nov 2013 (#)

Congratulations on your reproduction, I love kids but I wouldn't pop out so many when the man is no good.
I had one, wanted another, he abused me for asking for another and well, guess what he brought a prostitute for his liking and I let him and never took him back to live with me again and he lost his mental balance. Told him to live with the prostitute who made him that way and he did, I don't care, I have my child and I live and wait for justice that is part of my life and being. Over three years without being with a man and counting so my wait is still on and will be so for the rest of my being.

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author avatar poemgur1980
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

lol im sorry for your choice of words but just because your life is miserable doesnt give you the right to hurt other people by leaving rude comments on all there poems you know i feel sorry for i think you should get some help knowing how you were banned from this site your just a nut case trying to make other peoplr loose their self esteem but i tell you one thing there isnt a person in this world that can keep me thinking im less than anything i know i prove my self to be and regardless of my past that had sorrow caused by family or relationship at least i have a heart and would never want to amount to anything or anyone else so get a life and stay out of mine chow...................

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author avatar Williamsji
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

Dear Poetess,
An excellent, narrative story-like verse, contributes a realistic imaginary, I enjoyed well. I like creativity rather than destroying thoughts, I love beauty with all its ugliness and I am what I am, whether good or bad, others can announce, Great appreciation on your attitude, God Bless, Regards & Love from Williamsji Maveli

"got in my car and drove away
without looking back.
i needed a tissue to wipe my tear's
i found the letter i threw in the trash...." The most liked lines fro your poem. Regards

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author avatar poemgur1980
23rd Nov 2013 (#)

thank you

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