The Mysterious House~ Chapter 4

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The siblings must leave their magical friend but they promise to soon return.

Spilling the beans.

They headed back in silence Meme could see that Belle was very hurt at seeing her only trusted friend all jolly and happy with his new friends, whilst she awaits him worryingly.
'maybe we should have confronted him', she thought silently. But she said nothing until they returned.
They stepped into the kitchen once more. The girl was utterly heartbroken and the siblings saw it.
" Listen Belle we cannot stay much longer because our mom will be sick with worry..." Meme stopped as the girl's tears emptied down her cheeks.
" But... but I promise you that we will be back tomorrow, won't we Danny?" She meant it and Danny nodded his head vigorously in agreement. Belle looked at them both .and sniffled.
" Really?...You promise? "
"Yes we promise , it's summer and school is out so we will be back I promise you..." Meme said gently.

They were out the door moments later and Meme told Daniel how important it was not to tell mom about their new found friend. The rain had stopped now and she and Daniel walked quickly home because she remembered home was not far from here now. As they reached the stairway to their apartment they met their mother who had just arrived home. She looked at them startled.
" Where have you two been?" She asked.
" Mom we went into an old house and met a magical girl who stepped out of a painting
and Meme didn't want to believe she was real so we..."
"Danny!!" Meme shouted. She couldn't believe he was spilling everything even though she warned him.
" Daniel you have such a vivid imagination." Mother said and give Meme a quizzical look to which she shrugged her shoulders. The walked up the stairs and Meme kept a close eye on him which made him uncomfortable so he said nothing further.

Scolding Daniel.

After dinner Meme went to the living room with her mom and Danny.
"So Meme what did you guys do today?" her mother questioned, " by the way I don't mind you guys going out but I don't want you two out so late next time okay?"
The rain had started pouring again.
" Some whether we're having huh? " Mother said as she got up to check the windows.
As she left the room to check the bedrooms Meme quickly came to Daniel's side.
" Why did you tell mom, what's wrong with you, what if she wanted to see the house? Do you realize how much trouble you could have put Belle in?" Daniel mouth upturned as tears welled up in his eyes and spilled over." Okay okay don't cry please Danny... shhh...I'm sorry. She whispered . " Do you want to go with me tomorrow? " He nodded his head. " Okay then stop crying and you have to promise never to speak of her to any one. "
" I promise Meme ". He sobbed.
"Ok good." She wiped away his tears with the palms of her hands. She wasn't so sure he wouldn't speak of it again . She was hard on him because she had to protect Belle at all costs. She knew that he was just excited about their adventure today but this must remain their secret.

The mysterious house.
The mysterious house~chapter 2
The mysterious house ~ chapter 3
The mysterious house ~chapter5


Apartment, Crying, Home, Mother, Painting, Promise, Spill, Vivid, Worried

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author avatar Pink&Blue
I am from a small island called Trinidad and Tobago. I love writing and i take it seriously.Most of my work is straight from the heart whilst others require some soul searching.

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
15th Jul 2011 (#)

You're a fine stroryteller, Crystal. I look forward to the nexr chapter.

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author avatar Buzz
15th Jul 2011 (#)

That was a great literary piece, Crystal. I hope for the next installment.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
15th Jul 2011 (#)

Your story is painted with images the remain, wiping the tears with the palm of her hands, that lingers in my mind as your story continues, please!

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author avatar Pink&Blue
15th Jul 2011 (#)

Thank you my friends with your confidence in me i can maybe write a best seller one day!!

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author avatar jayababy
15th Jul 2011 (#)

Very interesting Crystal. Go ahead.

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author avatar john48
16th Jul 2011 (#)


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author avatar Songbird B
16th Jul 2011 (#)

Enjoyable read, Crystal, and full of intrigue...Great share..

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author avatar Pink&Blue
16th Jul 2011 (#)

Thank you my friends.

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author avatar Carol Kinsman
17th Jul 2011 (#)

I can't wait to see what happens...

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author avatar Retired
21st Jul 2011 (#)

Excellent story Crystal....

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author avatar Pink&Blue
26th Jul 2011 (#)

Thank you Starrleena.

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