The Night of Jasmines ~ A Synchrinistic Poem

Sana Rose By Sana Rose, 19th Aug 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Synchronistic Poem - Format

No. of stanzas: 8

Lines per stanza:3

Syllable sequence : 8-8-2 in every stanza.

Last 2 stanzas are meant to reveal the twist.

My first one of the form.

The Night of Jasmines

I reached to touch the soft jasmines
Of sweet summer nights I see you
In dreams...
~*~
My skin touched the fragrant petals
Of jasmines strewn all over on
Our bed...
~*~
I loved you as summer simmered
And Moon peeped in through the windows,
Smiling...
~*~
I trembled in suppressed giggles
When jasmines made impressions on
My back...
~*~
I fingered the withered jasmines,
Curling beside you, as you slept,
Jaded...
~*~
I breathed in your sweet breath blended
With the jasmine-scented night air,
So warm...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~

By my bedside, my cell phone rang,
Casting away all dreams, I wake,
Strung high...
~
Realizing there were still years
For the jasmine-scented nights to
Come true...

-September 20th, 2010
(c) Sana Rose 2011

Tags

Dreams, Jasmine, Love, Love Poem, Love Poetry, Night, Romance, Surprise, Synchronicity, Synchrony

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author avatar Sana Rose
A medical student with a love story with the pen since I was thirteen. Published poet at 22 and has completed a second collection and my first novel. Visit me at: www.sanarose.com

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author avatar Songbird B
21st Aug 2011 (#)

I simply adore your poetry, Sana...What a gift you have..

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author avatar Sana Rose
21st Aug 2011 (#)

Thank you so much, Songbird.. :) you are so kind to read my works. :) Really means a lot to me, dear friend..
If you'd like to, I have a published book in all stores online. But I'm considering to republish that book in India so that my country people can get it for a fair price. $7-10 dollars is too much for them. :)
I do want to read your works too but am having a tight schedule due to exams now. After that I intend to be active on Wikinut and look forward to share more and read more.
Thank you again, lovely friend..xx

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author avatar Songbird B
21st Aug 2011 (#)

I know how crazy it can be, my friend..Just know that I get a lot of pleasure reading your work...\0/x

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