The Rightness of Wrongness...or is it so...

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 29th Sep 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Hard to describe this one for it is deep and multi-leveled...Nothing is going on and yet worlds are being torn asunder all the time both metaphorically and physically...just look around! ....enjoy

As things are...

Like most things are
Behind curtains drawn
Where no one wants to go

No chink is left
To peep through
A miasma of nothingness
You to me
Me to you

Darkness gathers on outer rim
Sun cannot hide behind
Worlds swirl in disarray

The way it has always been
Always will be
A tale grown in hell...

Illusionary..

illusionary they be
Ones we cannot see
Covered by veils
MIsmatched

Drift they do
Matchwood down a stream
Blocking flow of water
Nothing to be seen

Crows peck hungrily
Eyes ears bloody be
Torn off chunks
What once was a man

Now a lifeless form

Revenge...

Revenge can be so sweet
Like sugar beaten
Coagulating
Dissolving
Nothing left

Strips floating in the wind
Away they go
Thrown by unseen hands

Clutching at what they think is right
Yet wrongness rears its head
Waiting all the time
To pounce

Across the universe

Across the universe she rides
On milky white unicorn
Christ energy protects them both

Far below he awaits
She knows if meet they do
Mighty eruptions will take place
Twixt heaven and earth

Love grows...

All this She knows
But carries on
In her heart grace doth appear
Spirit shares her joy

Heaven plays its mighty game
Watching all who down below
Twist and turn
So many ways

It knows their secret heart
Wherein much love doth grow
Even those that you may judge
It is so....

No beginning
Ending none
All is One
and so it is....

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
29th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you Steve again...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
30th Sep 2014 (#)

Awesoem post y dear Caro as inspired and talented as always, cheers love, XOXO!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

yes thank you Fern...i was inspired to write this one....

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
30th Sep 2014 (#)

And it's so hard -- once you get started assigning blame -- to stop. And it drags you right down.
Strong piece.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

maybe....

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author avatar spirited
30th Sep 2014 (#)

"The rightness of wrongness"

What a great title.

We all grow better in soil enriched with such "wrongness" or manure it seems....

everything is right everything is wrong.

What is once was so it is as you would say.

Mind-blowing wisdom again Carolina a pleasure to read.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you spirited...

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author avatar snerfu
30th Sep 2014 (#)

Makes me turn to meditation...great piece cnwriter.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

yes! I do so every day have been for the past 40 odd years...it is amazing the results...blessings...

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author avatar Stella Mitchell
30th Sep 2014 (#)

Revenge is never sweet in the heart of mankind ...it is always cruel , with a sting in its tail , Carolina .
' Revenge is Mine ', says the Lord .
Almighty God is the only One who is righteous in His judgement of us all , and therefore the only One who avenges us all with true justice .
Even the fallen angels know this to be true ....and tremble .
Bless you
Stella ><

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you dear Stella. I think God loves and never judges...only man does that...we are our worst judge and jury...blessings to you too...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

after all God so loved the world He gave HIs only Begotten Son...
and forgiveness is the Key to the Kingdom...
blessings to you and much light and loving too...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
30th Sep 2014 (#)

Thanks Carolina for another of your inimitable verse. Nature is ever so forgiving giving us a clean slate everyday, nay every moment, but we cannot perceive its munificence as we continue our way, or no way - each for himself/herself. Time to turn a new leaf is now or maybe never! siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

thanks so much Siva..
When we start to become whole and complete, the goodness of God in us starts to flow up and out, and takes the personality and lifts it up.

That doesn't mean that the negative side won't still nag away at us. But if we acknowledge the negative side, it will lose its power and will cease to control us.
quote JR....

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author avatar Ptrikha
30th Sep 2014 (#)

Another great poem!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Sep 2014 (#)

thank you my friend...

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author avatar Retired
2nd Oct 2014 (#)

Powerful verses, dear friend. Intense and expressive. Potent line--rightness of wrongness...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
2nd Oct 2014 (#)

yes it came through so powerfully rama...thank you...

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author avatar Kingwell
5th Oct 2014 (#)

All is one! Powerful!

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author avatar AjaySinghChauhan
25th Oct 2014 (#)

very interesting, thanks for sharing it with us

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
25th Oct 2014 (#)

thank you Kingwell and AjaySingh

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author avatar Ptrikha
28th Oct 2014 (#)

Amazing and mesmerizing poem!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
28th Oct 2014 (#)

thank you so much...

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