The Teenagers Bedroom -A Short Poem-

blackangelwings By blackangelwings, 3rd Dec 2010 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/i7yhmirq/
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A poem about some teenage habits and suffering parents.

The Teenagers Bedroom - A Short Poem -

The Teenagers BedroomHow can these socks belong to a child of mine?
When you were a baby you smelt divine
Dirt and mud, you attract
Like a John Wayne war film in the final act.

Water repels you like a vampire bat,
Stains travel with you from where you've been sat.
Your bedrooms worse like a toxic dump
To enter, air freshener i need to pump.

Clothes piled up Everest high
Avalanche wary, a total pigsty.
I know it's your space with music too loud
A total disgrace when you invite in your crowd.

Clothes, cups and plates left by your mates
You shout 'tidying's boring! '
Why not display a Hazard warning?

With rules I need to be more firm
Lessons on tidying you must learn
I feel like setting the mess to burn
Pocket money you need to earn.

What goes around comes around, you will see
When a parent you become eventually
'Tidy up!' I'll hear you plea
When i think of future times i'm filled with glee.

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Bedroom, Bedroom Odors, Behaviors, Clothing, Mess, Messed Up House, Messy, Teenagers

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author avatar blackangelwings
Hi, I have lived all my life in the beautiful county of Gloucestershire in England. I love to write especially poems. I write for fun and to relax but some of my subjects may seem dark. I seem to have the ability to write down and share ideas about ...(more)

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author avatar LOVERME
3rd Dec 2010 (#)

teenagers grow
faster than u know
u forgot ur own time
when u grew
and kisses
someone did steal too

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author avatar blackangelwings
4th Dec 2010 (#)

teenagers i know so well
they empty my fridge and my pockets as well.
Thankyou for reading. :)

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author avatar Denise O
4th Dec 2010 (#)

This brought me back in time, I tell ya!
You pegged a teens room, just right.
Good read.
Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar blackangelwings
4th Dec 2010 (#)

glad you could relate to this poem :) thanks for reading.

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author avatar Humza
5th Dec 2010 (#)

life of a teenager well described in just a few lines
good work blackangel!

but i was a sober teen

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author avatar blackangelwings
6th Dec 2010 (#)

thankyou for your kind words. glad you liked it. :)

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author avatar hosariwi
7th Dec 2010 (#)

Taking full control of our children is VERY CHALLENGING but VERY POSSIBLE.

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author avatar blackangelwings
8th Dec 2010 (#)

very true. thanks for reading.

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