The sailing boat

Neha Dwivedi  By Neha Dwivedi , 26th Sep 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Human life is very small and unpredictable for sure .sometimes it really gets difficult to handle life's surprises...


The boat goes into the river smoothly
smoothly, softly rather gaily
aware of the hurdles it has to pass in the form of stones
which will extend its journey of achieving its milestones
still it continues, with much hesitation though
of its fate and faith which it had little doubt would grow
twitching and switching its way through
trying and striving among the devils who seemed to groove
Oh! here comes the king of dead
i mean the king of devils,the ultimate threat
he roars with full strength
indicating the boat of its ultimate death
the boat losing half of its strain,
now thought of surrendering to pain
but then something stopped it
perhaps the ray of light which had not yet become dim
it got up, remembered its strength
with its ultimate strength ,it destroyed them
it was perhaps the love of its dear ones, which had caused the inner power to stem
atlast it reached its goal
picking me up, this time not for his
but for my journey in search of my dreams
which might be as difficult , well it seems...


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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
Hello people ! I am a student whose aim is to become a professional writer .I love writing all kinds of stuff but what interests me the most is poetry . Hope you all enjoy my writing (Neha Dwivedi )

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author avatar Buzz
28th Sep 2011 (#)

Welcome back, geeta. The journey in search of your dreams may be rough sailing but in time you will attain them triumphantly. Great share.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
28th Sep 2011 (#)

thanks Buzz..

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author avatar Youngturks
4th Oct 2011 (#)

very nice

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
6th Oct 2011 (#)

thanks Youngturks

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author avatar Songbird B
29th Oct 2011 (#)

Very moving share geeta.. Vivid...but hope-filled.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
30th Oct 2011 (#)

thank you Songbird...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
6th Feb 2012 (#)

We have to fight on as we do for our loved ones that gives added strength and reason. Thanks Geeta for a poem with much feeling - siva

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