This Could Be...A Tale Strange Indeed

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 27th Apr 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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So be it..for if people carry on the way they are doing...bereft of caring, loving, sharing.... instead greed and hatred war their tools to use then this piece might well tell of what could happen...


Down through layers of loam they went
Air water fire combined
Churning burning all the while
Turning fastly strangely lined

Earth now mottled red and black
Colour gone from sight
Nothing beautiful was left
That had disappeared
Mankind too
Turn of world come and gone
Another formulation had begun

Yet one small spark of light remained


War and strife decimation caused
Till only charred earth remained
Acid yellowed mist covered land
Waters coloured red
Nothing stirred
No sound

What survived no longer breathed
Poisoned air become
Bubbles of oxygen lay within
These animated forms
Age of robots now begun


A race of semi living things
Grown from what remained
Blood energized ran through their veins
Calciferous bones
Used intermittently to walk
Otherwise dormant lay

From tops of heads foliage grew
Fronds softly blowing in the wind
Brown and curled they were
Antenna to be used
Communicate one with another


Starcraft hovered overhead
Sightless eyes peered up
Wondering what these could be
They knew not of such things

Formed with no mind to use
No feelings any kind
Merely a sense of nothing-ness
Blank like an empty board
Merely a tool to be used

This is what mankind may find
If he carries on the way he is

so it could be.....


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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
27th Apr 2014 (#)

thank you Peter for the star and moderating so fast.....

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author avatar vellur
28th Apr 2014 (#)

The last paragraph spells out impending doom which will definitely happen if humanity does not change for the better. great write.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
28th Apr 2014 (#)

yes indeed vellur

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author avatar snerfu
28th Apr 2014 (#)

It is wonderful, yet one wonders. Could some of us be aliens? No, our minds would not tolerate such a thought and so we will never know. Good article cnwriter, makes one think.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
28th Apr 2014 (#)

actually snerfu we are all strangers in a strange land for our home is in the Kingdom of God...thank you my friend...

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author avatar MarilynDavisatTIERS
28th Apr 2014 (#)

Good morning, Carolina, food for thought. Enjoyed it in its prophetic manner. Let us try to be mindful that we do not become this even as the majority spin out of control to be controlled. ~Marilyn

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
28th Apr 2014 (#)

yes Marilyn...indeed we should...

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author avatar Cnwriter..carolina
29th Apr 2014 (#)

but unfortunately even here there are monsters gathered to eat up good

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author avatar Phyl Campbell
29th Apr 2014 (#)

Vellur had such a good point -- I have nothing to add to it but would have said very nearly that!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Apr 2014 (#)

thank you Phyl...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
30th Apr 2014 (#)

Indeed time to pause and ponder, dear Carolina. We are on an inexorable ride with none able to stop it. Einstein said - I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
30th Apr 2014 (#)

may be it could be Siva...thank you always...

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author avatar Kingwell
7th May 2014 (#)

Very true my friend.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
7th May 2014 (#)

I know dear Kingwell...

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