Twisted illusion

carly135 By carly135, 26th Mar 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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dont know which road to choose, i cant give up this early i got to find a purpose and something to live for

Twisted illusion

I have to make my way through this twisted illusion somehow
so many options, just don't know which one is best
my thoughts are confused with the path my heart wants me to follow
constantly lost in thought, don't know which road to choose
I feel the pressure every second, i just want to crawl in a corner and hide
I look to hell to see if i can get an answer
cause this fuckin' depression is eating away at me like cancer
negative emotions consume deep inside me
stirs within me a need to fight
i will never give up no matter how close i get to it
Cause deep inside im warped and twisted
My mind is drifting, empty and hollow
Im done being controlled by demons
everything is my fault, Im done letting you always win
Its really putting me down and i cant stand it no more
I need to strive for my right to fuckin' life
this is all just one piece of a puzzle to big to comprehend
cant see no light
but i know i'll make it through somehow


Dont Know Which Is Best, So Many Options, Stuck

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author avatar carly135
I started writting when i was a kid, im now almost 23.Any advice to be better would be bentifical.

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author avatar Funom Makama
26th Mar 2014 (#)

Thanks for the share carly135

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
27th Mar 2014 (#)

Wonderful poem Carly, you rock indeed!

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author avatar LOVERME
16th Apr 2014 (#)

u just have to make up ur mind or read Robert Frosts poem Roads...

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