Two Little Poems(4)

whatistheworld By whatistheworld, 25th Feb 2015 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/r-ygt-08/
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1.I
This is just the difference
2.Looking
Where would I be

I

No to tell the truth,no to do true thing and no to do true learning,in the end,these are only their own pit. In the world,only the seeking truth and being pragmatic things withstand history test! -- Preface

Why
Haven't become official
Haven't gotten rich either
But
Obsess with
Academic and art
Perhaps
This is just the difference
Between
True display of affection
False display of affection

Looking


Things to need to do
Are too many
Things to want to do
Are more
But
Things to have done
Are too few
Things to have successfully done
Are less
Looking
Back and forth crowd
Where would I be

(Note: ‘crowd’ refers to generation after generation of people in the history and future)

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author avatar whatistheworld
I am a self learner. I like philosophy and poetry from an early age. After work, I got an undergraduate degree in Chinese language and Literature through self-study exam. But my English is very poor.

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author avatar Margaret
25th Feb 2015 (#)

Very good.

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author avatar whatistheworld
26th Feb 2015 (#)

Thank you very much for your comment,lovely kitten. Can see you are an ambitious person.Wish you successful.

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author avatar Retired
26th Feb 2015 (#)

Great poems!

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author avatar whatistheworld
26th Feb 2015 (#)

Can see others sincere comment, this is a happy thing. Just hope it's not a civility.

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author avatar Carol Roach
26th Feb 2015 (#)

good work

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author avatar whatistheworld
27th Feb 2015 (#)

In the writing, it is not necessarily to must have superb skills, but must be sincere. Otherwise the high skill is no significance.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
26th Feb 2015 (#)

We complain about not having time but we have time for many things that are irrelevant upon deep reflection. We have to reinvent ourselves all the time. Good poem - siva

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author avatar whatistheworld
27th Feb 2015 (#)

Obviously, we have spent a lot of time on our reluctant things. But we must make good use of the limited time, otherwise we will live in vain.

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author avatar Utah Jay
23rd Mar 2015 (#)

Very good work. In the second poem, after the word "things" remove the word "to" and replace with the word "I" and see what you think.

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author avatar whatistheworld
24th Mar 2015 (#)

Many thanks for your guidance, partner. For me, a good grasp of English not only must but also be a laborious process. Actually I have a favor to ask. Can you introduce to me some famous magazine web site especially in the aspect of philosophy and literature?

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author avatar Utah Jay
23rd Mar 2015 (#)

In other words
"Things I need to do"
as an example from a beginner like myself.

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author avatar whatistheworld
24th Mar 2015 (#)

Thank you again, because I always think communication is forever more important than compliment.

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author avatar Judy Ellen
31st Mar 2015 (#)

Great poems, and, in fact I have been thinking too about all the things I should do that will benefit others along with serving my Lord. There are so many things I want to accomplish before my days on earth are gone.

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author avatar whatistheworld
1st Apr 2015 (#)

Dear Judy,

Thank you for your sincere communication. In fact, this is very valuable. I have been advocating that works do not necessarily have superb skills, but must be true.So at least they can achieve their historical values and be for future reference. So I suggest you write a book, a comprehensive record of your life. It must be true, mainly recording the problems you find and thus it can let future generations obtain a reference. In fact, I am also preparing a philosophical work of my own and it is my life value.

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