Two Little Poems

whatistheworld By whatistheworld, 11th Nov 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/2foss765/
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Two Little Poems
1.A Flaw in the Perfect
2.Net Serendipity

A Flaw in the Perfect

This is the most beautiful picture
Green hill green water green grass
The horses sheeps freely breathe fragrance
Brown wooden houses wander in the white clouds
Everything are all so perfect

A pair of handsome male female is riding a horse
They sometimes joke sometimes sing
The musical note of life undulate here
Everything are all so perfect
Only unfortunately the man is not me

Net Serendipity

Even though thousands of miles
Just as standing in front of eyes
Although do not know the looks
But have acquainted each other

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Flaw, Net, Perfect, Picture, Serendipity, Unfortunately

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author avatar whatistheworld
I am a self learner. I like philosophy and poetry from an early age. After work, I got an undergraduate degree in Chinese language and Literature through self-study exam. But my English is very poor.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
12th Nov 2014 (#)

Thanks for sharing your poetry. I love reading poetry. I think in the world we live in today anything that gives us peace is a good thing. Smile to you!

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author avatar whatistheworld
13th Nov 2014 (#)

Thank you very much, NANCY.The world is composed by sense and reason things. I think that poetry is the best perceptual things and I can be powerful and unconstrained style to express feelings here.This is the best spiritual food.

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author avatar whatistheworld
13th Nov 2014 (#)

Yes,NANCY. We need peace. In the environment of auxiliary symbiosis we can live better. We will resolutely curb the narrow shortsighted view .

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
13th Nov 2014 (#)

I think you are right. Poetry is spiritual food for the soul. I like that!

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author avatar Utah Jay
14th Nov 2014 (#)

Very nice.

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author avatar Grace Saliendra
15th Nov 2014 (#)

what we have in our environment will make us happy...we are stewards of the perfect creation of God....thanks for sharing your poems.

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author avatar whatistheworld
15th Nov 2014 (#)

The world says big big say small small. A cable connect the world. This is really amazing. Very much hope to meet those friends who have knowledge and skill.Very honored to meet you, Grace.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
22nd Dec 2014 (#)

Enjoyed the poems and the thoughts conveyed, meaningful - siva

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author avatar whatistheworld
22nd Dec 2014 (#)

Thank you very much for your appreciation. Even if that is the most perfect thing, but if it do not belong to us.Can this is considered to be perfect?

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author avatar whatistheworld
22nd Dec 2014 (#)

Thank you very much for your appreciation. Even if that is the most perfect thing, but if it do not belong to us,can this is considered to be perfect?

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
23rd Dec 2014 (#)

Awesome poem!

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