PJ Dorantes By PJ Dorantes, 25th Aug 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This is a short story about a young gentleman called Michael, whose life was almost perfect in the whole sense of the world, until he met on a party a beautiful girl called Lily…

Silly, silly boy

He had everything to make it big on life. Life had blessed Michael with a privileged brain, making him capable to understand and talk with eloquence about some of the issues that start endless discussions, like religion or gender related issues.
But not only so; Perhaps Michael wasn´t like one of those male magazine models, with a ripped abdomen, silky hair and perfect skin, and yet, he had a lot of luck with the ladies.
Knowing so, it was obvious that lot of Michael´s friends always wanted him to attend their parties, just to feel that they shared a night with such an interesting person.
On one of those parties, Michael met the woman who changed his life forever. While everybody else was dancing or getting totally wasted, she was sitting alone on a corner. It was strange to see such a girl so alone, because she truly looked like a beautiful porcelain doll. The young man had no trouble starting a conversation with her. She said her name was Lily, and she was there to find new friends. Michael and Lily exchanged round after round of drinks, and sooner than expected, the temperature of the situation began rising quickly.
After covering him with a shower of drunk kisses, Lily whispered to Michael “Hey, boy. I know this might sound weird, but would you like us to go to a more intimate place?” “Of course!”, said Michael at the moment. Giggling like a little girl, Lily took Michael by the hand, and with a big smile on her face, led him to an empty alley, no far from where the party was still going on.
“What a wild girl”, Michael thought, picturing himself having one- of a kind night with such a pretty. However he never expected that light to be his last one as a human being.
As they just reached the alley, Lily´s blue eyes suddenly changed color, turning into a pair of red embers, and on a second, her long fingers transformed into a knife-like claws
Michael didn’t stand a chance against the hunger of such a vicious creature. On a moment, she managed to leave him reduced to a lifeless doll, draining the vital liquid out of his body.
Nowadays, Michael still lives on this planet, but there is nothing left of the handsome heartbreaker of the past. Now, he lives as a monster, praying for the day when a highest power would release him from such a nightmarish imitation of life.


Horror, Horror Stories, Horror Story, Short Story, Vampire, Vampires

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Creativity is life. I write mostly short stories

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
25th Aug 2014 (#)

Wow! Great story!

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
25th Aug 2014 (#)

Thank you!

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
26th Aug 2014 (#)

Hope this remains a story and not a reality! Gripping, thanks purpletears - siva

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author avatar PJ Dorantes
26th Aug 2014 (#)

Haha! Thanks!

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