Verses of Passion...Pain....and More...

cnwriter..carolinaStarred Page By cnwriter..carolina, 16th Nov 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/lzadqbjl/
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Well my friends i am going into depths of feelings here but why not...am fortunate to be able to experience and express...perhaps you too do so...anyway just enjoy this...

Passion..

we could have soared beyond the stars
you and me
made passionate love on Mercury
was not to be

On Venus meshed
in glorious harmony
was not to be

On Mars planet of fire
you would have burned inside of me
was not to be

On Neptune
planet of desire
our wanting would have never stopped
was not to be

Pain..

I call to you
you do not come
frightened you be

i fill your days and nights
no surcease for you
neither for me

pain for both
we cannot be together
it is so....

Words..cold as ice...

frigid winter again arrives
burying beneath ice and snow
beating hearts
mine
yours too

words can say so much
yet mean so little
that is the way of mankind

he forgot his loving heart
and turned it into ashes
scattered everywhere

that is the way it goes....

Ending....

when you float upon a star
do you wonder where you are
accept that this can be

for we all are travelling
into the heart of God
going different ways
maybe
but all paths lead to one

and so it is..

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Being, Carolannathan, Carolina Natan, Cnwriter, Fare Amore, Harmony, Knowing, Loving, Mars, Mercury, Pain, Passion, Venus

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I have been writing on food, wine, travel, cosmic creation and erotica for over 30 years I do horoscopes and numerology and light readings.

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Nov 2014 (#)

Oh my goodness! Be still my heart! This pulls on the heart strings. The picture titled "Lite my fire" is so beautiful. I have no words. I love "Ice and Snow" You are so talented. It is amazing. The world is a better place for having you in it.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you so much Nancy...do you see the woman in that picture...ha! love to you...

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author avatar Nancy Czerwinski
16th Nov 2014 (#)

Carolina, I did see the picture and it is truly magnificent!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you Mark for the moderation and star...your little poet is on a different tack now...ha!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
16th Nov 2014 (#)

go away you silly assyanna lady...i will keep on deleting your rubbish on my pages...in other words Piss Off...

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author avatar Utah Jay
16th Nov 2014 (#)

Now, now dear, don't be angry when I tell you how talented you are and how beautiful this really is.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

this was not for you dear Utah..it was for that one who calls herself lady A...

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author avatar spirited
17th Nov 2014 (#)

"accept that this can be"

"was not to be"

perhaps methinks these lines are connected, one is the reason for the other...

lovely mixed metaphors of imageries spliced together to help the mind unravel, a truly great work here Carolina.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

actually dear spirited they are not connected ..one is to do with the physical...the other spirituale...
love you lots, cx

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author avatar spirited
17th Nov 2014 (#)

is there anything that is not connected though, in some way....

I am not that good at getting your meanings when I try to use my mind to find such connections, it seems.

I should just let myself ride your waves, not try to link them together...

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author avatar spirited
17th Nov 2014 (#)

I meant though, that if we do not spiritually accept that this can be, it will continue to physically not be for us then too. One is the reason for the other.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

too true my friend...for that is how i write...waves flowing through going where they want to go...it is so...
oh and when I say they are not connected i mean they are on different Levels of Being...
you are right all is connected in one way or another..thank you for pointing this out...blessings...

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
17th Nov 2014 (#)

Some pains you can't feel or share;
some can't express out of fear;
Some far away and near-
This is somewhat life all about my dear...

Great work Carolina...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you so much Md....

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author avatar viewgreen
17th Nov 2014 (#)

wonderful writing... Thanks :)

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you my my new friend....

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author avatar Ptrikha
17th Nov 2014 (#)

Another great work from your stable!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

where I keep the horses..ha ha! could not resist that dear Ptrikha...love you...

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
17th Nov 2014 (#)

Love is so natural but we stay rooted to negativity to keep us going around in circles. Let us break free and soar higher and higher to embrace the whole of creation. Inspiring are the words and the images, dear Carolina - siva

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you Siva my dear friend...

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author avatar Carol
17th Nov 2014 (#)

Lovely, this is beautiful xxx

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you so much Carol..lots of love to you...

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
17th Nov 2014 (#)

This is really fantastic - among your best ever. What a ride you took me on. Wow!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

ta ever so Steve...i am on that ride still...oh oh oh....it is wonderfully exciting and frightening too...

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author avatar WOGIAM
17th Nov 2014 (#)

The first image scared me but i enjoyed the poem. Weldone Carolina

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author avatar GV Rama Rao
17th Nov 2014 (#)

Excellent. How do you get these ideas and images?
Needless to state I enjoyed reading your poem.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

hello GV...they flow through me like waters of the Nile flow...unceasingly...thank you...

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
17th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you Wogiam...

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
20th Nov 2014 (#)

Awesome and interesting post!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
20th Nov 2014 (#)

thanks me darling Fern...

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author avatar Kingwell
22nd Nov 2014 (#)

Great wring my friend. Love the picture too!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
22nd Nov 2014 (#)

thank you dear Kingwell...am prolific on google plus...too..love to you...

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author avatar vellur
27th Nov 2014 (#)

WOW! Lovely and beautiful write.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
27th Nov 2014 (#)

thank you vellur...greetings...

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