We die everyday!

Rathnashikamani By Rathnashikamani, 13th Mar 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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This poem is a spontaneous out-pour of my thoughts that just came upon my intriguing mind while I was enjoying one of the excellent poems on Wikinut.

To live in a better way!

We die everyday
to live in a better way!

We love to be honored
for the life we strive.

We strive to live a life
that was never alive.

The hearts seek the hearts
that beat for their sake.

The minds find minds
that think in their way.

The world awaits to see
the winners of a lifetime.

And the world avoids those
who shun their lives alive.

We live every day
until the end to die another day.

We love life until death
and hate death when we're alive.

So, we kill everyday
to feel it in a better way!

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author avatar Eunice Tan
15th Mar 2011 (#)

Perfectly agree. We live until we die

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

Eunice Tan,
Thanks for your time and comments.

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author avatar Humza
15th Mar 2011 (#)

great share! and very true
thanks for sharing

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

Humza,

Thank you for the appreciation.

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author avatar mountainside
15th Mar 2011 (#)

...Interesting...Sleep could be considered a form of death.....especially if we don't wake up. Thank you.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

mountainside,

You're right. Sleep is the death we die everyday and wake up with new life.

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author avatar Retired
16th Mar 2011 (#)

Reminds me of Nightmare 3...sleep--those little slices of death" great share!

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

Thank you DSF,

I'm blessed with your recognition!

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author avatar hestylim
17th Mar 2011 (#)

nice share! ^.^
I like the part when you say, we die everyday to be a better one.. :)

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

hestylim,

You're most welcome to enjoy my poems.

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author avatar Artur Victoria
20th Mar 2011 (#)

Super!
Rathnashikamani, I realy enjoy rading your poems

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

Hi Artur,
I'm delighted by your remarks.

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author avatar jvaughan
24th Mar 2011 (#)

You have written another excellent piece of poetry here!
I'm not sure if my comment will show an understanding of the poem you wrote, but I must say that that I prefer to seek out individual hearts and minds that I would be willing to die for. The world is not my goal.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

jvaughan,

What you said is correct. The world cannot be my goal. But our horizons expand as we share our love. Is it OK?

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author avatar vpaulose
25th Mar 2011 (#)

An interesting and informative poem. Thank you Rathna.
vpaulose

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

Thanks vpaulose.

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author avatar jvaughan
27th Mar 2011 (#)

Rathnashikamani, it is an excellent poem. I agree wth you, sharing our love will expand our horizons.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
27th Mar 2011 (#)

Thank you jvaughan,
for the kind words.

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author avatar Mystique1957
1st Apr 2011 (#)

When we understand that death and life circle in the eternal renovation of spiritual ascension, the extremes touch. There´s no death without life nor life without death.The essence of existence. Great share!

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
10th Apr 2011 (#)

Well-said Mystique,

"There´s no death without life nor life without death". Very inspiring comments!

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author avatar Retired
13th Apr 2011 (#)

Excellent share

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
13th Apr 2011 (#)

lucia anna,
Thanks again for your visits to my pages.

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author avatar Bets
7th Nov 2011 (#)

Hi friend, I thought this was fantastic. I especially liked, "The world awaits to see
the winners of a lifetime." Yeah, that's kewl! Smiles, Bets
P.S. Now this in turn reminds me of a poem I wrote that maybe I'd like to post. lol. Isn't that strange kinda? Have a fun Sunday evening. :)

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
7th Nov 2011 (#)

Bets, your comments encourage me to write more.
Right now, I'm browsing your poems.

Will post my comments there on your pages.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
7th Nov 2011 (#)

Can't wait to see your new poem that you're going to post.

And now it's already Monday morning in India.
Have a good day:)

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