When you break up..

LOVERME By LOVERME, 5th Dec 2013 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Many times when you break up..You rarely accept your own faults But then tis too late A poetic lesson for young teens

Many times when you break up..

Many times when you break up..



Many times when you break up...and hold another’s hands …you always recall the warmth of the first one...who had held your hand …but then comes a barrier in between his ego and mine..

His anyone can define… but none can mine

I all along my decades of sharing knowledge… have requested all

take a step...one at a time… lest you fall …and most love to fall along with the ladder… that's about all… and then make stories tall ------

no one else is interested in your tears… as you weep alone… no one fears as long as you smile… along with me ….let the devil think …what he does …but give the devil his due… perhaps you forget a longer ego is fathomless… you need to learn to dive deep… in still waters even non swimmers sweep..Clean…

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Break Up, Breakdown, Breaking, Breaking Bad, Breaking Up, Breakup, Breakups, Many Lifetimes, Many Roads To Travel, Many Roles, Many Years

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The one and only LOVERME
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author avatar Williamsji
5th Dec 2013 (#)

Excellent, enduring, overall alluring words and thoughts, Congrats, Love, Regards, WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Dec 2013 (#)

so kind and generous are u willy ji ...
there are not many like you ..
and so---- my many many mnay thanks 2 u

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author avatar Williamsji
6th Dec 2013 (#)

I love to read and enjoy your short love lyrics, It's all poetic and superb-Regards and Thanks
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
5th Dec 2013 (#)

Insightful and pregnant with pragmatism. Those who were dear to us have endearing qualities. Let not pride and ego come in the way. It is never too late - siva

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author avatar LOVERME
5th Dec 2013 (#)

if only we could make slices of ego and devour sir

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author avatar Mariah
6th Dec 2013 (#)

lovely wording...

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author avatar LOVERME
6th Dec 2013 (#)

so kind

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author avatar Fern Mc Costigan
7th Dec 2013 (#)

Nice post and peom loverme

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author avatar LOVERME
7th Dec 2013 (#)

thanks Ferns

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author avatar LOVERME
14th Oct 2016 (#)

Many times when you break up...and hold another’s hands …you always recall the warmth of the first one...who had held your hand …but then comes a barrier in between …his ego and mine..

His anyone can define… but none can mine…

I all along my decades of sharing knowledge… have requested all

take a step...one at a time… lest you fall …and most love to fall along with the ladder… that's about all… and then make stories tall ------

no one else is interested in your tears… as you weep alone… no one fears as long as you smile… along with me ….let the devil think …what he does …but give the devil his due… perhaps you forget a longer ego is fathomless… you need to learn to dive deep… in still waters even non swimmers sweep..Clean…

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