Whether I Am a Child or an Adult?

Parth Saxena By Parth Saxena, 1st Apr 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/12dv76j3/
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This poem is written by me when I was thinking about the feeling of a teenager that what he thinks about himself about being child or an adult, he remains in the confusion but feels awkward to ask from others.

Whether I Am a Child or an Adult?

I'm giving you my hearty views,
In the form of some easy clues,
To solve my hidden puzzle
Whether I am a child or an adult?

Once when asking my mother to go-
for an enjoyable shopping or a tour,
She replied - 'You're still a child
To be sent out alone.

Contrary they always say
Leave your toys and stop your plays
You are the future of great nation
being grown up, be a good citizen.

Now I'm in great confusion
I'm in which situation
Please help to solve my puzzle
Whether I'm a child or an adult?

Next would be you
Who would ask the world too?
Is there no one who can solve my puzzle?
Whether I'm a child or an adult?

-Prateek Sahai


Adult, Childhood, Confusion, Feelings, Puzzle, Situation

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author avatar Parth Saxena
I believe that one can express himself better by writing and I am doing the same.
Well! I am a Guitarist and Vocalist, So some of my music can reflect in my articles. I hope you'll love that...

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author avatar Mark Gordon Brown
1st Apr 2012 (#)

It is more fun to look at life as though a child. Good poem.

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author avatar Parth Saxena
2nd Apr 2012 (#)

Thnxx Sir... :) :)

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
2nd Apr 2012 (#)

I prefer living life in segments and having an outlook like a child wherein I enjoy life come what may and when it means business, work in totality to achieve the target successfully and bring forth laurels to not just myself but to the main object of working as a whole.

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author avatar Lady Aiyanna
2nd Apr 2012 (#)

Always feel it is good to be a child with an adult style of thinking which is beyond years and imagination, whereby you leave the whole world in awe as to how do you integrate the best of both worlds to produce your own world which is placid and calm yet volatile when needed.

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