Why so confused !

Neha Dwivedi  By Neha Dwivedi , 10th Aug 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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Everybody at some stage of his or her life goes through a phase when they find everything confused because of this very person.

Confused

He looks at me with his kind eyes
making my inside flutter with butterflies
a gentle smile peruses through his lips
making me go insane, as if been caught up in bills
unknowingly i see myself smiling to him
returning the gesture, considering it a beautiful dream
recognizing what i have done, i move my eyes away
trying to prevent myself from getting distracted by the beauty making me sway
but is it that easy as it sounds?
as i see myself sitting alongside him at every other round
listening to his stories which surprisingly don't bore me
discussing , debating making myself go free
free to share my thoughts and feelings
which i could not have otherwise fearing
but when it comes to our feelings
i find myself walking somewhere in the dark
piercing myself with a tool which is too sharp
making me bleed from inside
hurting me, killing me whenever he sits beside
i don't really know where it will take us to
as i have left it up to the destiny to take a view as i am too shy to make a move!






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Confused, Confusing, Confusion, Confussion, Love, Love And Desire, Love At First Sight, Love Poem, Love Poetry, Love Story, Lovely, Smile, Smiles, Smiling

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
Hello people ! I am a student whose aim is to become a professional writer .I love writing all kinds of stuff but what interests me the most is poetry . Hope you all enjoy my writing (Neha Dwivedi )

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author avatar Buzz
13th Aug 2011 (#)

Aha, a girl head over heels in love! How romantic, geeta. Winks.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
13th Aug 2011 (#)

hey Buzz....it is just an imaginary poetry...so no real life comparisons please....thanks for your comment!

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author avatar Lila Bangsawan
13th Aug 2011 (#)

I'm agree with what Buzz said. The poem is so romantic as an expression of love at the first sight. Nice post, Geeta !

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
13th Aug 2011 (#)

thank you Lila....

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author avatar jayababy
13th Aug 2011 (#)

Ahhhaa, Lovely poem.How old r u geeta dear??

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
13th Aug 2011 (#)

thank you jayababy

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
13th Aug 2011 (#)

Very nice - like a romantic dream. Thanks for a great poem, geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
13th Aug 2011 (#)

thank you Steve for posting your comment!

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author avatar Carol Kinsman
14th Aug 2011 (#)

Beautiful and romantic....Thank you, Geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
14th Aug 2011 (#)

thank you Carol for posting your comment!

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author avatar Songbird B
14th Aug 2011 (#)

Heartfelt and touching..A lovely share..

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
14th Aug 2011 (#)

thanks songbird....

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author avatar Phoenix Montoya
15th Aug 2011 (#)

That was romantic, geeta :)

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
15th Aug 2011 (#)

thank you phoenix

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