Why so many Why's???

Neha Dwivedi  By Neha Dwivedi , 22nd Jul 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I was just sitting on my couch having coffee when 100's of questions started pondering in my mind which left me wondering why???

why?

why is that my eyes feel moist without any reason
and that my heart pounds with frustration
why do i need to give an answer to a question
when i am in full aggression
why do i need to apologize when not guilty
and say sorry to a person who is not worthy
why is that i have to sleep when i don't want to
and get up when i don't wish to
why is that you tend to love people who don't love you
and cry in pain when they reject you
why do we sometimes get the feeling of dying
when everybody around us are flying
why is that you tend to lose a job when you require it the most
making you wander for another one like a ghost...
why do I get why's in my mind
whose answers are very difficult to find.....

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Confessions, Conflict, Confused, Confusion, Curiosity, Mind, What, What Are, What Is, Why

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
Hello people ! I am a student whose aim is to become a professional writer .I love writing all kinds of stuff but what interests me the most is poetry . Hope you all enjoy my writing (Neha Dwivedi )

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author avatar Buzz
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

Which poses a question to me myself as to why geeta is as cute as her poem, why her mind outflanks mine, why oh why? :) Great poem, geeta!

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author avatar Retired
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

When I was a child, like all children, I always asked why and my mum told me to be quiet. Our doctor heard my mum and told her never to stop me asking why because it broadens the mind. Thanks for your poem and reminding me of this memory.

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author avatar bronnamdi
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

Thanks for asking why because why puts the mind on inquiry and leads to deep thinking that produces results.

Why is the father of research.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

thank you buzz for your wonderful compliment.... :P

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

thank you gina for your comment and i am really happy that my poetry brought your good memories back....

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

you have rather given a very logical look to the poetry and thanks for that...

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author avatar vpaulose
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

Why makes life sweeter. Thank you Geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

thank you sir...you comment really means a lot to me.

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author avatar ASHRAF
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

All the most important summed up in one place . You are a gud poet who just needs some guidance and refining. Good work.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

thank you asraf and yes i am not a very good poet...it is just that sometimes i feel like taking out what is there in my mind....thanks a lot for your comment...

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author avatar David Reinstein,LCSW
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

Yes... But, why?

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

truly why???but thanks for your comment...

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author avatar Denise O
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

A lot of whys to ponder here, I wish I had the answers for you. All I know is, you have captured what a lot of us are asking ourselves daily as we too, wonder why. Very nice.
Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

i wish somebody could answer me...but thanks for the compliment...

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author avatar Artur Victoria
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

Geat and fantastic - congratulations!

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

hank you artur...

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author avatar Steve Kinsman
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

Why?, indeed. Thanks for a great share geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

thank you steve....

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author avatar Songbird B
23rd Jul 2011 (#)

The mind needs to be constantly stimulated, constantly stretched...curiosity can be our greatest ally... I really enjoyed reading this, as I do all your work, Geeta,..Why? because you are a charming writer and gifted poet my friend..

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

thank you songbird...i don't really know if i am a gifted writer or not....but yes i really find myself gifted for having friends like you

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

well i just didn't expect so many comments on this poetry which i considered very nothing when compared to others...

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author avatar Carol Kinsman
24th Jul 2011 (#)

The only way we get answers is to ask "why?". Nice poem, Geeta.

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
24th Jul 2011 (#)

thank you Carol....

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author avatar Siddharth Sen
4th Aug 2011 (#)

gr8 thoughts!!!

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author avatar Neha Dwivedi
14th Aug 2011 (#)

thank you Siddharth....

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