Winning against criticism...

Shona.UN By Shona.UN, 1st Feb 2014 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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When people say you are gone, prove them that they are wrong

How nice it is to see you

People said you were finished,
Business fell and all your riches evaporated
To settle the dust of debt.
You walked out empty handed years ago,
People said you were only as good as dead
They thought you will never come back again.
I still remember the tearful farewell
You gave me, friend, with no words to say.
People thought you lost all,
But you gained experience, which was precious,
I knew you will come back as winner,
Now after many years,
How nice it is to see you again!

Why do you care?

You have always laughed at me when I fall
You wanted me to go down and down
It was glee for you to see me tumble in life.
But you didn’t know you were doing me good
The more you pulled me down,
The more I went up like a spring.
Now that I prosper, why do you care?
You look for some other game
To laugh at and pull down, to satisfy your brutal fun.


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author avatar Shona.UN
I am an MBA and have worked as manager in banking operations. I have a great interest in creative writing, poems especially.

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
1st Feb 2014 (#)

We are never defeated unless we give up - siva

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