Winter's Woes

richardpeeej By richardpeeej, 16th Dec 2012 | Follow this author | RSS Feed | Short URL http://nut.bz/16sy1jyp/
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A poem that describes using alliteration, the chills and cold of the long winter days which may even result in coughs, colds and visits to the doctor's surgery. It is times such as these when we look forward to the warmer days of spring and summer and flourishing gardens.

Winter Woes

....A poem that describes using alliteration, the chills and cold of the long winter days which may even result in coughs, colds and visits to the doctor's surgery. It is times such as these when we look forward to the warmer days of spring and summer and flourishing gardens.

Winter Woes
Winding westwardly, winter walking,
Slipping, sliding, snowing still.
Rambling ruthlessly, randomly, restlessly,
Hurrying homewards, hazardous hill..

Cold chills, classic chesty coughing,
Doctors doors, dark dreary days.
Soon summer sunshine, sandy shores,
Will waken winters weary ways.

Richardpeej Dec 2012

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Alliteration, Cough, Doctor, Poem, Richardpeeej, Richardpeej, Winter

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I enjoy playing the guitar, gardening, writing poems, doing a bit of cooking and catching up with my good friends on the net

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author avatar Sivaramakrishnan A
17th Dec 2012 (#)

Thank God I have never experienced winter in my life - always lived in the tropics - siva

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author avatar richardpeeej
17th Dec 2012 (#)

Hi Siva it must be good to have all that fine weather there...thank you for looking in to my poem....take care my friend ....Rich

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author avatar Delicia Powers
17th Dec 2012 (#)

Wonderful...!

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author avatar richardpeeej
17th Dec 2012 (#)

Thank you Delicia so kind of you to comment ...hope you are well I need to do some catch up ;-)

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author avatar Buzz
18th Dec 2012 (#)

Hope to read more of your lovely poems, Rich. Keep 'em coming again.

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author avatar richardpeeej
18th Dec 2012 (#)

Thank you so much for your support Buzz...it is always good to hear from you :-)

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author avatar Christine Crowley
18th Dec 2012 (#)

Just wonderful - I feel the same about winter!

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author avatar richardpeeej
18th Dec 2012 (#)

Thank you Christtine it is good to be back writing again..

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author avatar Songbird B
13th Feb 2013 (#)

Oh this was so creatively written Rich, and I love the style you have used dear friend..It certainly captures Winter...\0/x

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author avatar richardpeeej
14th Feb 2013 (#)

Tahnk you so much Bev it has been a cold one here where I live and it is still just a s cold now...Bring on the summer my friend!

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
25th Feb 2013 (#)

Very expressive ...thanks and keep up the good work....

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author avatar richardpeeej
25th Feb 2013 (#)

Thank you for your support as always cnwriter my friend.

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author avatar Carol
11th Mar 2013 (#)

Great poem so well expressed. thankyou.

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author avatar richardpeeej
14th Mar 2013 (#)

Thank you so much Carol for your very kind comments.

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
14th Mar 2013 (#)

have not seen you around for a while so ello love...

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author avatar richardpeeej
14th Mar 2013 (#)

Hi cnwriter..I haven't been here for a while but hope to be back on a little more regular now....thank you for missing me :-)

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author avatar cnwriter..carolina
2nd Apr 2013 (#)

well my dear You are well worth missing xox

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author avatar richardpeeej
17th Apr 2013 (#)

Thank you cnwriter..sorry for the delay in answering...I have doing some DIY at home..tiling and papering ...a man's work is never done ..lol

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author avatar Md Rezaul Karim
20th Apr 2013 (#)

Well written season-poem. Thanks for sharing the feelings.

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author avatar richardpeeej
13th Jun 2013 (#)

Thank you so much Md Rezaul, I appreciate your kind words.

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author avatar Kingwell
13th Jun 2013 (#)

Winter has it's charm too, especially for the young but now I'm always happy when it is over. Good read.

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author avatar richardpeeej
13th Jun 2013 (#)

Thank you Kingwell, so glad you liked my poem. Yes the winter has been with us far too long here..

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